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Index to Kiva's Writing Series

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Offline Kiva

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Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« on: October 16, 2024, 06:36:22 AM »
A few of you suggested I create an index of my posts on the process of writing stories. I couldn't get the hyperlink to work, so I hope this looks semi-presentable. I'll plan to post this on my profile as well. I'd like to thank my fellow writers for sharing their insight, tips and advice on this wonderful craft. Thank you to the readers for sharing their thoughts and suggestions. I enjoyed this series, and I hope it helped you in some small way.



First vs. Third-Person Narration    https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=114618.0

Past vs. Present Tense              https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=114688.0

Setting                            https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=114762.0

Plot Structures                 https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=114818.0

Creating Characters
1.   Physical Description                https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=115004.0
2.   Dialogue                              https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=115277.0
3.   Action                              https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=115501.0
4.   Backstory/Monologues           https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=115776.0

How & Why of Women Fighting   https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=115850.0

Fight Scenes
1.   Action Sequence                   https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=116005.0
2.   Putting It Together                   https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=117142.0

Thoughts on AI                 https://www.freecatfights.com/forums/index.php?topic=117913.0
« Last Edit: October 16, 2024, 06:37:51 AM by Kiva »
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Offline MikeHales67

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Re: Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« Reply #1 on: October 18, 2024, 11:54:23 PM »
Thank you very much for that.

I'd already saved them all as a text file. But this will be a great link to point to in the future.

I would never have done stories like 'Interacial Harmony on the Tram to Deansgate' or 'Cripple Cart Cowgirls Catfight' if it hadn't been for your inspiration. You are now up there with Harlan Ellison as my most inspirational writers! (No that is high praise - honest!)

Again Thank You.

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Re: Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2024, 10:53:51 AM »
Thank you very much for that.

I'd already saved them all as a text file. But this will be a great link to point to in the future.

I would never have done stories like 'Interacial Harmony on the Tram to Deansgate' or 'Cripple Cart Cowgirls Catfight' if it hadn't been for your inspiration. You are now up there with Harlan Ellison as my most inspirational writers! (No that is high praise - honest!)

Again Thank You.

Thank you, Mike. I’m honored if anything I posted helped inspire you to create your own stories. I might not be Harlan Ellison, but I think I’m a nicer person. lol  :)
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Re: Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2024, 04:34:24 PM »
Thanks for all your help Kiva.

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Re: Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2024, 09:57:48 AM »
This is great.  Makes it a lot easier to reference back to!

It would be wonderful if we could get this post stickied at the top of this section of the forum so it doesn't get lost in the rush over time...

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« Reply #5 on: December 16, 2024, 08:56:19 PM »
Came across this the other day. Emma Coats who works at Pixar, rules for writing.

1: You admire a character for trying more than for their successes.

2: You gotta keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what’s fun to do as a writer. They can be v. different.

3: Trying for theme is important, but you won’t see what the story is actually about til you’re at the end of it. Now rewrite.

4: Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.

5: Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You’ll feel like you’re losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.

6: What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?

7: Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.

8: Finish your story, let go even if it’s not perfect. In an ideal world you have both, but move on. Do better next time.

9: When you’re stuck, make a list of what WOULDN’T happen next. Lots of times the material to get you unstuck will show up.

10: Pull apart the stories you like. What you like in them is a part of you; you’ve got to recognize it before you can use it.

11: Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a perfect idea, you’ll never share it with anyone.

12: Discount the 1st thing that comes to mind. And the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – get the obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.

13: Give your characters opinions. Passive/malleable might seem likable to you as you write, but it’s poison to the audience.

14: Why must you tell THIS story? What’s the belief burning within you that your story feeds off of? That’s the heart of it.

15: If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty lends credibility to unbelievable situations.

16: What are the stakes? Give us reason to root for the character. What happens if they don’t succeed? Stack the odds against.

17: No work is ever wasted. If it’s not working, let go and move on – it’ll come back around to be useful later.

18: You have to know yourself: the difference between doing your best & fussing. Story is testing, not refining.

19: Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it are cheating.

20: Exercise: take the building blocks of a movie you dislike. How d’you rearrange them into what you DO like?

21: You gotta identify with your situation/characters, can’t just write ‘cool’. What would make YOU act that way?

22: What’s the essence of your story? Most economical telling of it? If you know that, you can build out from there.

Emma’s 22 rules (which she now dubs guidelines) mixes ideas of what makes a good story with advice on how to get writing – some of them will work for you, some may not, so absorb whichever are useful.
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Re: Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2024, 04:09:17 AM »
Thanks for sharing these, Mike. All are good points to remember. In college, I wrote a short story fiction. My instructor took my draft and told me to cut the word count by one third. I was horrified, convinced I’d have to butcher my story. But in the end, I had a tighter, streamlined, coherent story and lost nothing by subtracting. Sometimes it helps to step back and ask some questions that Emma brought up.
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Re: Index to Kiva's Writing Series
« Reply #7 on: December 19, 2024, 08:43:24 PM »
We're almost developing a "Combative Women Elements of Style" book here.

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