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My Man

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Offline sandra_4766

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My Man
« on: September 12, 2015, 06:16:32 PM »
The office had shut down early on Friday afternoon because of a party for one of the employees who was retiring. The regular office crew was there as well as few other friends. Rick and Sandra  were among those present and they were enjoying themselves along with everyone else. There was plenty of food and drinks there. Sandra was off to one side talking to a couple of her friends while her boyfriend Rick was on the opposite side of the room getting a few drinks and chatting away.  Sandra seemed to know everyone there at the party except for this Asian woman who was there with some of her friends.




Sandra was checking this Asian woman out as from where she was  this woman appeared to be around the same age as her,23. She was about 5'6" in height and had a well developed body that she wasn't afraid to show off as she was wearing a skirt that was a few inches above her knees  plus a slit in the side that went to the top of her thigh and with each step she took her legs were exposed. She was also wearing heels and a red blouse that had the top two buttons opened that exposed some of her cleavage. She also had a full head of black hair. Sandra kept checking her out from a distance as she was also talking to her friends at the same time.




Sandra's mouth opened wide as she watched this woman walk up to Rick and started talking to him as she snuggled close to him her leg hitting Rick's. Sandra asked one of her friends that she was with who this Asian woman was and one of the answered that it was Mia Lee. She worked two floors up in another office and was known to go to different office parties. She was also know for trying to steal other women's dates. Sandra kept watching her as she worked on Rick. She wanted to go over there and tell her to back off  from her man but she didn't want to create a scene at the party.




Sandra waited till she saw this woman going to the ladies room as she told one of her friends to come with her. Just before Sandra went inside the ladies room she told this friend of hers not to let anyone else in till she came back out. Sandra went inside and waited as she made as if she was washing her hands when Mia came up to the sink and washed her hands. They were the only two women inside the  room as they looked at each other and nodded. Once Mia had washed her hands and was about the leave Sandra grabbed her shoulders and pushed her back up against the wall. A surprised Mia looked right at Sandra. "Okay bitch," started Sandra, " I am going to tell you just once and that is  back away from my man."




Mia was takened by surprised as he quickly looked Sandra over as she stood in front of her. Both were the same height and had the same build. Sandra was wearing a mini skirt and a blouse with the top two buttons open exposing her cleavage. Mia grabbed Sandra's shoulders and in one quick move turned things around as she had pushed Sandra up against the wall her chest against Sandra's and it  was apparent that neither woman was wearing a bra as they felt their nipples against the others. "Don't you ever touch me again you bitch,"hissed Mia at Sandra. " I can talk to any man I want out there and as long as he is not wearing a ring  he is fair game."




Sandra pushed Mia back from her as both women glared at each other. "Look, Rick is my man and I am telling you to leave him alone or else I will beat the face office you. Do you understand.?"




"Like I said if there is no ring on his finger he is fair game," answered Mia as she stared right back at Sandra. "As far as you beating the face off me bitch I am more than willing to fight you for Rick if you are woman enough to."




Sandra was surprised by Mia's reply as she glared at her. She took a step towards her. " Look Mia, I am not afraid of you at all. I will fight you for Rick if that is you want, but we will not fight here as I don't want us broken apart. I just want it to be me you and me in a catfight. If you are woman enough  here is my address and I will meet you there in about 45 minutes  if you still want to fight me."




Mia took Sandra's address  and looked it over. " I will be there Sandra, just you and me," she answered and then pushing her body against Sandra's she left

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Offline GoldenGirl

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Re: My Man
« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2015, 01:58:03 AM »
A very promising start...the characters are finely drawn...and you've chosen the ideal scenario.

I also like your punchy style of writing....brief and succinct paragraphs....and ample spacing between them. Makes it so much easier to follow the action.

Looking forward to seeing how this develops.

Congratulations!

GG

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Offline Sandman13

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Re: My Man
« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2015, 04:11:45 AM »
Nice set-up. Very interested to read more!

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Offline Boche

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Re: My Man
« Reply #3 on: September 13, 2015, 07:16:42 AM »
Great start Sandra.  hope to see a continuation soon

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Offline Tigressel

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Re: My Man
« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2015, 12:54:43 PM »
Great start there. Waiting for the next part
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