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my first post

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Offline maifights

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my first post
« on: May 29, 2011, 10:12:54 PM »
Thanks for looking.
Let me know what you think.

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Offline luffy316

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Re: my first post
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2011, 02:14:00 AM »
a good scene but the mouths look odd
Always posting free stories and commissions over at http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/luffy316

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Offline maifights

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Re: my first post
« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2011, 02:56:18 AM »
well this is halfway through the story.  They've got black eyes and bloody swollen lips.  I guess it would make more sense in context. thanks for the comment though!