I really love this!!! The way you show both Gemma's 'n Karin's faults 'n insecurities, there is no goodie or baddie in the story (so far LOL). They are both totally real, not the stereotype arrogant stuck-up blonde cheerleader or the goth bully with the bad attitude. It's really hard to pick one to root for or hate.
Awesome so far, *G*!!! Can't wait for the next part!
hugggzzz 'n xoxo
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