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Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)

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Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« on: September 03, 2010, 08:14:08 PM »
Zoë was nuts! She was seriously bat shit crazy! Everyone knew it, but despite that her friends stuck by her. I mean… you have to stick up for your friends right?… well… not always it seems…

It’s not that she was a total psycho… it was just when she was around her boyfriend James… A more jealous girl is hard to imagine! One time she was at the pub with her friends and one friend gave James a high five… she received the foulest look for her troubles! Another time he went to the bar to buy a round and when he came back she accused him of flirting with the barmaid in front of everyone, you could almost feel the air chill as he looked stunned and embarrassed, of course she just read his embarrassment as a sign she was right and he’d been caught out when really he was just buying a drink!

Zoë was a pretty girl, young, with a full figure, curvaceous and sultry, she had a real air about her! She only just turned 18 but you wouldn’t believe it unless you knew it for sure, her hair brown and wavy, her large voluptuous 36dd breasts accent her figure beautifully. She has a rebellious edge too her, pierced and tattooed she wears her personality on her sleeve.

James was quite a different prospect, quiet and shy but with a charming personality if you were brave enough to risk Zoë’s wrath to find out. He had long hair and was a metal head through and through. He had a slight lisp which he hid by speaking softly and quietly, this gave him quit a staggering contrast between himself and the loud, fun and brash Zoë

Our tale finds our protagonists partying late into the night, Down in the Basement club called Metros, the grimy, dirty club was like a second home to Zoë, Moving to Cardiff from a small town so young it’s one of the few places she felt accepted. Her friends always assumed her age was the reason she was so jealous, and that’s why they forgave her, it must be hard being an 18 year old girl moving to a strange city, the only person you know being your boyfriend, of course she became clingy… but sometimes, too much so…

The girls were dancing and the drinks were flowing while the guys sat in the alcove drinking away and admiring the view! The funny thing is, as much as Zoë hates James getting attention, she does enjoy the eye’s of others all over her… at least she did until she saw two girls sit down in the alcove…

They were just enjoying their drinks and grabbed the only seat they could and James’ friends being young and in a club started talking to them. The conversation flowed, they joked and laughed and really hit it off until Zoë stormed over…

“What the fuck is going on?” she growls, her hands on her hips of her baggy, black jeans, just above the studded belt, her breasts were squeezed into a tight black Pantera T-shirt and you couldn’t help but feel intimidated by her

“wh… What?” the small redhead sat opposite James stutters looking rather scared

“I SAID what the fuck is going on? Are you hitting on my man bitch?” she scowls, feeding off the girls fear

“no… god no, I was just having a drink!!!” she protests panicked

“Come on Zoë, stop being a twat!” James’ friend moans bewildered. James head is in his hands now as he laments his girls temper

Unbeknownst to Zoë, Helen was fuming in the background… she’d had just about enough of Zoë’s childish outbursts. Helen was much smaller than Zoë, 5’2” to Zoë’s 5’7” and gave up at least 40 lbs but she was raging, panting hard she just needed a good night, this was her only night off and this bitch was ruining it! Helen came dressed to party, a stunning corset top matching her tiny skirt and a pair of heavy studded boots, she looked every part the rock princess!

“Every fucking time we go out she starts this shit!!!” Helen moans to Kelly, her blonde friend nodding in silent agreement, clearly fed up also

The she saw Zoë take a step to far… grabbing the small redhead by the hair she drags her 6 feet from the alcove onto the dance floor, the little girl crying and waving her arms around in a terrified panic! Zoë starts throwing in kicks into the smaller girls gut, her trainers slamming into the petite redheads stomach over and over again

“oh that’s it!!” Helen snaps charging over! She pushes Zoë hard from behind sending the bigger girl sprawling over her victim and sliding across the dance floor. Helen kneels down and checks on the girl

“are you ok munchkin?” she purrs brushing the hair out of her face, but all the redhead can do is cry as she sits stunned at the sudden violence. Helen nods to the little girls friend silently ushering her other to get her home.

“What the fuck Helen???” Zoë screams getting back to her feet

“You crossed the FUCKING LINE!!! They were having a drink you FUCKING PSYCHO!!! What’s your fucking problem?” Helen fires back. Zoë looks stunned for a second, nobodies ever stood up to her childish antics before, but her attitude soon returns…

“She was all over him! She deserved what she got!!!” Zoë hissed and this just riled Helen up even more

“tell you what bitch! Why Don’t you try picking on me? COME ON!!! TRY IT!!!” Helen screams, the heavy riffs still pound over the system but everyone is turned watching the chaos play out before them

“Don’t be stupid!” Zoë snaps “I’m not fighting you!”

“You fucking scared bitch?  Only got the guts to pick on smaller girls?” Helen throws back

“Bitch! don’t know if you noticed this but I’m bigger than you too! I’m not going to fight a friend so shut the fuck up!” Zoë scowls back

“Fine… you to fucking scared to pick a straight fight with me, I know what’ll change your mind…” Helen growls turning her back on Zoë and marching over to the alcove straight towards James…

“What are you doing… Helen?… oh… YOU’RE FUCKING DEAD!!!” Zoë screams as Helen leans over and plants a huge, passionate kiss on James’ lips, her tongue slips in and ravages his own… the kiss is hard on long until she feels a burning agony in her scalp and Zoë digs her fingers into her died black/red hair and rips her back flying through the air!

“FUUUUUCK!!!” Helen screams landing on her back as Zoë proceeds to rain in kicks to her stomach! “I’ll make you fucking cry like that other red haired SLUT!!!” Zoë screams smashing her trainer in deep! Helen curled up to protect herself before firing up a kick of her own! Smashing the bigger girl in her breasts!

“AAAAGGHHH!! BITCH!!!” Zoë shrieks stunned! Helen leaps up to her feet quickly, adjusting her corset top the two girls circle each other, the sweaty dark room filled with eye’s gawping at the sight as the heavy guitar continues to pound.

“I’m no fucking pushover SLUT!” Helen hisses rubbing her hurting abs “I’m going to knock you the fuck out you cxnt!” Zoë hisses back “I’m gonna send you to the fucking hospital!” she threats as she lunges in grabbing Helens hair and ripping her head back!

“AAAAGGGGGGHHHHH!!!” the smaller girl cries then Zoë throws in a hard uppercut to her stomach and pushes her back against the wall, gripping Helens hair with both hands, Zoë SLAMS Helens head into the wall over and over again! The entire club and Helen and Zoë’s worried friends look on, knowing Zoë is in the wrong but to scared to get involved.

Seeing Helens eye’s slightly glazed over she holds her up by her hair still against the wall with her left hand while she throws punch after punch into Helens exposed abs and ribs! Her tight corset offers no protection as hr younger, bigger assailant demolishes her.

After a minute of torture, Zoë out of breath looks down at her beaten friend both breathing hard but Helen in agony Zoë asks “Done yet bitch?”

“I HAVEN‘T EVEN STARTED cxnt!!!!” Helen roars taking Zoë by surprise and SLAMS an uppercut into her attackers jaw!

Zoë staggers back but stays on her feet until Helen runs forward thrusting her palms into Zoë’s huge breasts!

“AAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHH!!!!” Zoë screams in pain as the blow to her breasts sends her flying backwards with Helen crashing on top of her, still ripping into her breasts as she straddles the younger girls stomach! She stars raining down slaps with her left hand as she continues her mauling with her right hand, Zoë tries to defend herself flailing her arms blindly but to no avail as slap after slap lands, stunning the Brunette and turning her pale cheek a bright red!

Zoë finally grabs hold of Helens hair and pulls her down while she sits up, their two skulls colliding with a sickening thud! Helen’s eye’s roll back as she falls off onto the dance floor and Zoë crashes back, both girls dazed and stunned!

Their friends watch nervously, hoping that’s brought an end to it as they both slowly get up to their feet… the music still pumps but the silence between them is eerie as the masses stand glued to the spot…

Both women stare at each other panting and hurting until with a scream they hurl themselves at each other!!! Both sets of hands fly up as hair is ripped at and torn out! Flinging each other from side to side in a stalemate as they scream and hurl abuse at each other! Then a shocking blow tells the two girls apart… the difference is finally made as the crowd Gasp! An almighty thud rings out as a Knee SMASHES into an opponents pussy!

Helen drops to her knees tears rolling down her cheeks as she nurses her throbbing crotch, Zoë showing no remorse grabs her hair with her left hand and rains down a horrendous right hook smashing her smaller foe! Her eye’s are already glassy before she hit’s the floor, rolling in a daze, mumbling incoherently, she lays there while Zoë straddles her and pins her arms to her side with her legs. Then she rains down slaps and punches like a woman possessed, Helen is powerless as Zoë finishes her!

After 20 brutal seconds of abuse Zoë finally grips Helen’s hair and lefts her head off the floor, staring right into her eye’s she coldly states “Time to knock you out you fucking cxnt!” and with that throws a devastating right cross into her face! The force of the blow rocks her head back where it cracks against the wooden dance floor and the fight is done.

Zoë gets up and leaves he beaten friend on the floor, bloody, bruised and unconscious as she glares at James letting him know it’s time to leave




I hope you enjoyed my first little foray into catfighting!
I know you’re probably thinking damn! I wanted Helen to beat the shit out of that bitch!!!
But sometimes the girl you hate is just tougher than you!

Post a comment if you have an opinion!!!

Much love scrappers!

x G x

« Last Edit: September 04, 2010, 12:33:04 AM by Gemma Rox »
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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 09:16:59 PM »
Damn gurl!  Great job!  I was pulling for Helen though... :(

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 09:40:23 PM »
Intensely sexy - a lovely read! Yummy yums!  :P ;)
Naughty - but oh, so NICE! :-)

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 12:38:37 AM »
A note to all!!!!

the story isn't about me!!! lol (I'm not THAT crazy! lol)

yes the main character has tattoo's and piercings but that's because the girl it's based off does! lol
it's loosley based on an exaggeration of my friends personalites and my fight obbsessed brain fantasising over the two of them kicking crap out of each other! (well... considering I fantasise about my friends attacking each other maybe I am a little crazy...)

In real Life Zoe is lovely but if she gives me another evil stare for high fiving James I may well beat the shit out of her for real... lol

Enjoy!!!
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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 12:41:02 AM »
In that case, I would root for Zoe.

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 12:48:08 AM »
In that case, I would root for Zoe.


You are SUCH a bitch! lol, I'm kicking your arse when I'm done with hers!!!!

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 12:54:11 AM »
In that case, I would root for Zoe.


You are SUCH a bitch! lol, I'm kicking your arse when I'm done with hers!!!!

x G x

Blah, blah, blah.  That's what you said last time too!

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #7 on: September 04, 2010, 12:56:27 AM »
How dare you re-quote my quote!!!

It's on like Donkey Kong Bitch!!!

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2010, 11:07:14 AM »
a good one. keep writing

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #9 on: November 21, 2016, 05:55:55 PM »
A note to all!!!!

the story isn't about me!!! lol (I'm not THAT crazy! lol)

yes the main character has tattoo's and piercings but that's because the girl it's based off does! lol
it's loosley based on an exaggeration of my friends personalites and my fight obbsessed brain fantasising over the two of them kicking crap out of each other! (well... considering I fantasise about my friends attacking each other maybe I am a little crazy...)

In real Life Zoe is lovely but if she gives me another evil stare for high fiving James I may well beat the shit out of her for real... lol

Enjoy!!!

Mmmm delicious, although like most everyone else I was rooting against the psychotic bully... My mind immediately leapt to the little redhead and her (undoubtedly tasty) friend timidly creeping back in after Zoe storms off, dragging James away. They gently bring their knight in shining corset home and nurse her. Mmmm, so much nursing... And training, of course, because they're going to put that evil bitch down! The training, and sparring, of course, requires more nursing. Ahem, hopefully you never have to fight your actual friend...but if life dictates otherwise, please spread the wealth?

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #10 on: November 21, 2016, 06:27:12 PM »
Nothing like a 6 year necro thread bump.  >:(
RIP the account of Sophie Cees.

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #11 on: November 22, 2016, 12:15:41 PM »
Great story. I have to admit I was rooting for the girl to take down the bully and settle her down, but great story.

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #12 on: December 06, 2016, 11:01:14 PM »
Oh my GOSH! I'm so flattered that people are reading my back catalogue after all these years!!!

Oldrugger82 - Thank you so much :D So pleased you enjoyed the work enough to make a comment! Always nice to get a response! ♥♥♥

Leroy Veritas - Calm your fucking tits! So somebody wanted to comment on an old story... does the date is was written dictate if someone is allowed to make a comment? No. This is an open community of like-minded fetishists and fight enthusiasts who come here SPECIFICALLY to share their likes and wants! People come here to engage with one another! It's a fucking FORUM! Don't ever try to vilify someone for having the decency to engage with another member they happened to enjoy. It's a dick move buddy, be better than that.

JT Edson - hehe I get that a lot :p I wanted to buck with my usual writing trends on this one and I guess it worked as it got a response! :D

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Re: Catfight in the Club (when two friends collide...)
« Reply #13 on: December 11, 2016, 02:43:44 PM »
Glad Oldrugger82 brought this story out from years ago. That was your first catfight story? thats impressive. You really describe the main character quite well. It was interesting how you called attention to fear being the first reaction of the victim and how that spurs Zoe on even more. Contrast that to Helen, who despite being smaller is non the less spunky enough to pursue the challenge the way she did.
 
While it would have been nice to see Helen win, clearly Zoe was able to meet the challenge and after a back and forth fight, she was better skilled with her legs and fists and kept at it until there was a clear winner.

I'll be looking for more of your "catalog" soon.