[Windwatcher5]

Correction as of feb 24 2010 10:20

Luffy316 is the original writer of this story and i would like to ask if she would mind completing the story or making it a  if that is possible
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The Story

The legend goes that once every dozen years or so, there is a traditional among the small folk. It is called Fairy Circle, where sprites, pixies, brownies, leprecauns, and tiny magical beings of all sorts gather.

This gathering is not for what many folks would consider fairy behavior. This is a rather dire get together, as this is where the creatures fight for breeding rights among their gender. The females battle in a different location every year for the strongest and most attractive males, fighting tooth and nail and getting very serious about the whole thing.

This year, the little women were meeting in a large home of a wealthy man who was out of town on business. The full range of the house was theirs, so many battles could happen wherever the challengers chose to have them. Even the owner's large garden could be used. The humans had many strange instruments around that they could use for their own designs in battle as well.

Minx was a fairy with large pink wings, very long purple-hair, and a long tail. She was a long-time top competitor at Fairy Circle, having a desire to fuck anything she wants.

Ivy was a younger nymph, with thorn tattoos circling each of her biceps and several piercings. She had dark green skin She was looking to make a big impression on this Fairy Circle, but mostly because she wanted to kick some ass, not win all the best breeding partners.

For this fight, the little women would start fighting on the kitchen table. Several dishes of food were laid out, with the fighters being hardly bigger than a cherry.

“You little pup,” huffed Minx as she strutted around her rival. “You think you can waltz in here and take me on one on one?”
“Thought crossed my mind…” Ivy sucker punched the resident champ, clocking her in the jaw and knocking Minx backward into a cream pie. She fell back and was smothered by the whipped cream, Ivy diving in waist deep in the mess to pursue her.
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[luffy316]

um.... windwatcher? i'd ask that you look at my user name.... and thanks for the appreciation. i write a lot at chyoo, but tend to build off of other peoples' ideas best, or at least like to wait until people show their appreciation some.

[Windwatcher5]

Oh luffy i'm sorry i just checked the author part of the page and yes this is one of your many great contributions to fighting fiction. i understand how you would see this as rude that someone would post a piece of your stories without your permission. that was not my intent and i am very sorry.

you have to admit that aside from the create a wrestler stories on chyoo, most of the catfight stories do have dead ends or missed opportunities.

on this forum all you need to do is make a poll for another member vs member "what if" fight and some guy will make a story. so i figured this would be a good place to have someone complete your story.

Again i'm sorry but now that you see that someone appreciates your writing would you feel inclined to complete the story? it is such an interesting premise.

[luffy316]

i am a bit... nothing motivates me like interest, usually. chyoo is full of dead ends, unfortuanately, as its made to be ongoing. i HAVE written a full story here of Tifa vs Peach, and the Diana Backfight set in One Piece of original characters, though only 1 part so far (nearly done with 2)

and not mad at any of this. it's advertising at worst, i figure. glad to see you like it

[luffy316]

well, what sort of things would go down here? tiny ideas for moves with wings or big foreign objects wuold be nice. imagine these fairies have strength of about a normal person so can be mighty wild with em

[Windwatcher5]

Ideas huh. okay these are just off the top of my head and please make any changes you want. on the idea of wings and tails. well wings would allow someone to jump high for attacks, reach high places (which comes in handy if your tiny) and escape. if the wings become a bother then have them magically removed. As for tails that depends, a prehensile tail can be useful to trip up an opponent and distract if you use it in "interesting ways". but if it is just for show then you can bet someone is going to grab it and spin you by it just as long hair does in a fight.

for strength i say give the fairies a little edge of they're size, a bit of magic so they can lift the items with relative ease. a knife and fork from a dinner set can become a spear and trident to them. trying to think about other items if the girls are going to use weapons

now enviroments set in a giant sized house offer a lot of opportunities. again take and pick what you like.
Dining Room: as it is said the table is fully stocked with dishes and desserts and we aready have the fight starting off with a sucker punch into a pie. How about a multiple layered wedding cake that offers a king of the hill scenario. or they fall into a glass of wine and now the fighters are drunk. and of course theres always room for jello as they say.

Kitchen: Kitchens can be dangerouse. you have large knives, cooking implements, ovens and stoves to add to the dangers, a fight goes from the frying pan and into the fire, to badly reinterprete an old saying. Now i don't know the time setting of the story so they may have a fridge or not. fight goes in there, the door shuts and the light goes out. most kitchen also have cuboards and pantry full of cereal, coffee powder, flour and stacks of can that can be used as hiding or attacking. one tiny fighter is looking for her prey walks by a cereal box and thinks" did Lucky Charms change their mascot?" followed by a wham!

Bathroom: at their tiny size the tub is now a lake, the sink is a swimming pool, a shower would be a downpour and then there is the dreaded toilet, for a threat. you also have stuff to use here such as toothbrushes for weapons, floss to tie someone up, soap and bubble bath liguids for added chaos.

Bedroom: perfect place for a fight considering the motivation of the fighters. the bed is now the size of a large field, a hit by a pillow is like a hit from a hippo. the fighters could fight on the cover or try under the cover in a bit of blind fighting. if the owner of the house has a wife then maybe put a vanity with perfumes and makeup to add some chemical warfare to the rumble.again this is a bedroom and you never know what kinky bedroom items might be around for the fairies to use.

Playroom: if the owners of the home have a kid then they may have a room full of toys and games. the fight goes around the room knocking over stuffed animals and crayons and markers in the mix. there might even be a point where they fight they are fighting in a dollhouse, now the size of the house and the fighters match and its a little strange. maybe even a bitchslap to a barbie that is being used as a decoy. people when they're kids make they're action figures fight all the time so that is a good way to work out how a fight like this could go down.

Attic and Basement: the same place really. dark spooky and full of spiderwebs. good location if you wanted one of the fairies stalking the other whos waiting to pounce. the only thing different is that basement tends to have washing machines which can be fun if one of the fairy becomes trapped and the other turns on the spin cycle.

and finally the Greenhouse Garden: well first off you know there is bound to be some mudwrestling. the garden is like the size of a jungle and you can have a punchup in the pumpkin patch, a thrashing in the tomato garden. two fairy's fighting it out covered in mud and surrounded by flowers. people like to get dirty in the garden.

well there's a couple of interesting ideas. feel free to use them or not. one more thing about a possible ending, since one fairy is fighting for pride and the other fairy for sex could as the fight is near its end the two combine their goal into an issue of pride in their sex? i know its a cliche idea to get a sexfight or sexual fight at the end but after reading your Diana Backfight i've seen you done it before.

[luffy316]

sounds like... a lot to work with!  I updated the chyoo too, and i can use a good amount of these...

[Windwatcher5]

no problem i like brainstorming ideas. and thank you so much for continuing the writing.

[cffan14]

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