Wow... I haven't read this much feedback for a story I've done here in a long time. I'm humbled and honored to have been a part of something so well structured and fun and I'm very happy that you all enjoyed my end of the story; with the previous parts being written by two of most outstanding writers the genre has seen and one other writer who's my personal favorite, my part had a lot to live up to. There was a line that I forgot to put in the story. It would've come after the match.
Kayla- Wow, Marie; how'd you think to use a leg full nelson on Gemma?
Marie- Oh, I was on the General Discussion About Catfights Board in the Submission Holds thread and Gemma posted a comment describing the hold. I figured why not beat her with it hahahahaha.
I might put it in on the version I have saved to my laptop. Like I said, it was an honor doing this and "working with Marie" again. And I don't know if anyone noticed; every chapter's subtitle is an Elton John song. Marie quoted his song "Island Girl" in the last chapter and since this was from her point of view, I decided to go in that direction as well as put in a bunch of inside jokes and playful jabs. You guys be breezy!
