[koolswan]

Suzy was my best friend since college. We were part of the same group and got along like a house on fire. Over the years she started liking me which became obvious when i broke up with my then girlfriend at the end of college. Suzy gave me the support and was there for me. I liked her but never as more than a friend since I did not want our amazing friendship to suffer.
Guess she also respected my feelings and never spoke out her true feelings for me. Some of our common friends knew about it but never brought it up. Five years after college, all of us were working and stayed in touch and met up regularly. Suzy is extremely beautiful with long black hair, almond eyes and a tanned body. She is 25 years old,  5.2 feet tall and slightly plump.
During one of our weekends, I brought Melisa whom I worked with and liked a lot to our usual joint. I had been going steady with her for the last 3 months. We had a lot in common and were enjoying each other a lot. I had told Suzy about Melisa and she wanted to meet her. Melisa is very pretty, she had short wavy black hair, big black eyes, a pretty straight nose and tanned body. She is 23 years old, 5.4 ft tall and has a great body. There was this nervous tension between my best friend and my girl friend. Sometimes women have a sixth sense and they could sense they were rivals. Soon Suzy would compete with Melisa on various things and challenge her at pool or darts or who could put in more baskets at the game.
Both were competitive and sooner or later it was going get nasty.

Well it happened sooner than i expected. After a month of introducing them, we had planned a trip to my farmhouse on the outskirts of the city. It had been raining cats and dogs since Thursday and by Saturday morning all my friends backed out except for Suzy. It became odd as I picked up Suzy and then Melisa and drove silently to the farmhouse. After almost three hours of driving we reached the quaint farmhouse on top of a lush green hill. It was still pouring and we ran inside quickly. I went to the kitchen to check on the supplies and make some hot chocolate.
While inside i could hear them talk first about the weather then about me and suddenly there was silence and some murmuring followed by shouting of bitch..slut...whore...
I quickly ran into the hall where both of them stood toe to toe hurling abuses and about to come to blows. I stepped in between and asked "what happened?"

Melisa still looking at Suzy with hatred in her eyes said "its obvious that she hates me and loves you."
Suzy turned red but was now willing to speak out her feelings " yes i do love him and i think that you are a slut. He deserves better."
"How dare you Bitch! I more of a woman than you can ever be you fat cow"
Before I could intervene they had come to a solution about settling this. Maybe they had planned it out while we were still in the car I don't know. Both of them wanted to tear each other up. I was getting excited that they wanted to fight for me. The stakes were high. The winner would get to make love to me in front of the loser and the loser would have to sleep on the porch like a bitch for the rest of the weekend. Both of them had never fought before and had not been in a catfight so it was important to lay down some rules. I told them that there would be no punching of face and scratching of eyes. They would fight in their lingerie.

Both of them had wanted to beat the other girl since their first meeting. there was a lot of pent up aggression that was going to come out. I cleared the hall and spread the carpet out on which the fight would happen. Melisa seemed little nervous as she started removing her jacket and t-shirt. Melisa must have weighed about 114-115 pounds. Suzy looked very confident she was at least 10 to 12 pounds heavier than Melisa.
Both faced each other and started circling. Melisa was wearing a black lacy bra and matching black panties. Her breast's were firm 34 Cs. Suzy was in a pink stripped push up bra with a bow and matching panties. Although she was plumper than Melisa, her breasts were smaller, 34 B.

They both checked each other out from head to toe. Melisa grinned wolfishly and commented "no wonder you could not have him, you like a badly swollen pig." Suzy had a little flab around her stomach, ass and thighs. Suzy retorted "I will definitely have him now and beat your skinny ass and tie your carcass on the porch like the slutty bitch that you are!"
Both of them lunged at each other with their claws in each others hair.

[koolswan]

Hi everyone,
this is my first story on this board. Please feel free to comment and let me know your views as to how you have liked the story so far.

Part two will follow soon.

[koolswan]

Part two cont'd:

Both of them had a strong hold of each others hair. After a few frenzied moments of struggling, Suzy was able to use her weight and push Melisa back and slammed her into the wall. Still both of them had each others hair in their hands. Suzy twisted Melisa's short hair viciously and Melisa let out a loud grunt of pain. Melisa changed tactics and brought her knee into Suzy's soft abdomen. Suzy was taken aback and her grip loosened. Melisa taking advantage of that kneed her rival again. Suzy grunted in pain and quickly backed off letting go off Melisa's hair. Both women separated sizing each other up. Melisa was the first to react as she quickly slammed a strong right hand slap across Suzy's face. Suzy flared up in anger gave her own right handed slap across Melisa's face. Melisa winced back the pain and pounced on Suzy and grabbed her throat. Suzy too grabbed Melisa's throat and both were strangling each other. However Melisa's height gave her an added advantage as she pushed back her shorter rival. Melisa pushed Suzy onto a round dinner table and was on top of her and choking her. Suzy was trying her best to choke back Melisa but was not very successful. She wanted to scratch Melisa's eyes but controlled herself and got her feet up and shoved it into Melisa's stomach. It was a strong kick and Melisa lost her balance and fell down on her rump. Suzy steadied herself and touched her throat which was bruised and red. Melisa got up holding her abdomen. Both their eyes were focused on each and they had a determined expression on their face. So far neither of them had got an upper hand.

Suzy put her hands in front with open fingers challenging Melisa to a test of strength. Melisa slowly extended her hands. After a moment, their fingers clasped and the test of strength began. Suzy had slightly bigger biceps but Melisa's were more toned without any flab. My best friend and my girlfriend were trying their best to push the other one back. Their faces contorted with obvious effort of the challenge. It seemed that they were evenly matched. Their tanned biceps bulged with the strain as small beads of perspiration started forming on their foreheads. Both were making grunting noises and trying their best. their legs were stretched as both of them used all their strength to come on top. Melisa's ample bosom was heaving with the effort. After almost five long grueling minutes, Melisa was able to bend Suzy's hands back. Suzy let out a low growl and took a couple of steps back and using her body pushed back Melisa to their neutral position.  Their hands getting tired they bring them down still clasped as their bodies collide tit to tit in a contest to gain supremacy. Melisa in a jerky movement brings up her hands pushes down Suzy who goes on one knee. Melisa applies more pressure and brings her body to further push down Suzy. Suzy's hands and wrists are now bent backwards and she is finding it tough to push back Melisa. Melisa now completely pushes Suzy to the carpet and comes over her. Suzy gets her legs over Melisa and struggles to throw her off. Melisa has still not let go of Suzy's hands as she tries to pin her rival. Both their hands are sweaty and Suzy is able to slide her right hand out of Melisa's grip and grab her hair. With that Suzy is able to roll over Melisa. Both their legs are intertwined and they are holding and pulling each others hair.


To be cont'd....


looking forward to your views and comments.

[koolswan]

Suzy is now on top of Melisa and both struggle hard to gain leverage. SMACK! Suzy slams a backhanded slap across Melisa's face. Melisa's lower lip starts bleeding. Suzy now starts to choke her rival with both her hands. Melisa struggles hard to push her away but Suzy is able to keep her pinned thanks to her weight. Melisa now tries to grab Suzy's throat but Suzy fends her off with her elbows. Melisa is grunting in pain as Suzy's hold becomes more stronger. Melisa's eyes start watering and suddenly Melisa's hand reaches over Suzy's breast and she grabs and twists it with all her power. Suzy is completely taken by surprise and shrieks out in pain letting go of Melisa's throat. Melisa grabs Suzy's hair and throws her off her. Both of them are lying on the carpet their eyes still on each other. They get on their knees, their breathing is hard and fast. Neither of them wants to give an inch. However they both look tired. Suzy is sweating more and breathing harder. They both lunge at the same time, grabbing each others biceps. Melisa is able shove Suzy down and get on top of her. Melisa grabs Suzy's hair with both her hands and starts pounding it on the soft carpet. Suzy struggles desperately to throw Melisa off but is unable to. Suzy's head is throbbing in pain as it hits the floor again and again. Despite the carpet the pain is unbearable. Melisa slaps Suzy 3-4 times on the face. Suzy's nose starts bleeding. Melisa is now sitting on Suzy's breasts and has her completely pinned. She again slaps her in the face. It seems that Suzy is too tired and is unable to throw off her opponent.
Melisa grabs Suzy by her long hair and drags her around then she kicks her in the abdomen and throws her face first on the carpet. Clumps of Suzy's hair get stuck in Melisa's fingers and she blows them off. Suzy is sobbing but tries to get up. Melisa jumps on her back and twists her right hand back as in a hammerlock. She twists Suzy's hand more and Suzy yells in pain. Melisa taunts her "well bitch, who deserves him now? eh!" Suzy is humiliated and angry. Melisa is on top of Suzy, pulling back Suzy's right hand with her right. Melisa shifts her body further and grabs Suzy in a headlock with her left hand. Suzy is in immense pain and shouts out in agony. Melisa asks her " Do you give up bitch?" Suzy only cries out in pain. I step in and ask Suzy if she wanted to give up.
"NO!!!" yells Suzy. Melisa is surprised but she does not let up. After two more minutes of dishing out pain Suzy yells "let go, you are breaking my arm." Melisa lets go of her headlock and sits on her back slapping the back of her rivals head.
I had never imagined that my girlfriend and my best friend would fight like this. I had a huge erection.
Melisa walks over to me and feels my erection she takes my cock in her hand and is fondling it. Suzy was is quietly sobbing in pain. She looks at us and sees this. I can still sense fight in her. The look of pure hatred is on her face. She slowly gets up rubbing her right arm which is all red and her nose still bleeding. She steps towards us. Melisa notices my expression and turns around. She says "Hope you are satisfied with the beating you got."
"Its not over" Suzy spits.

Melisa is erupts in anger when she realizes that Suzy still wants to fight. I step in between and tell them to take a break for 15 minutes. I give them hot towels so they can clean up their faces. After the break, Melisa says "This time I will finish you off"
Suzy replies " Its my turn to dish out the punishment bitch!"

Melisa stretches her hands with open fingers challenging Suzy to a test of strength. Suzy clasps her fingers into Melisa's and the test begins. Suzy is already in pain due to the hammerlock and Melisa is quickly able to push her rival back into the wall. The moment Melisa has Suzy pinned against the wall she slams her knee into Suzy's stomach. She repeats it 7-8 times. Suzy is completely out of breath and doubles over. Melisa lifts Suzy by her bra straps and POW! lands a hard backslap on her breasts. Suzy shouts in agony tears start forming in her eyes. Melisa pushes away Suzie's hands covering her breasts and lands another strong backhanded slap on the tender skin. Suzie is in unbearable pain and runs away from Melisa. Melisa quickly grabs her from behind swivels her and throws her on the floor. Suzy lies there in featal position. Melisa comes over to my side and kises me for a long time.
My girlfriend then taunts Suzy "do you give up now fat cow." Getting no response, she walks towards her rival and jumps on her. Suzy is playing possum and lifts her knees up and Melisa lands on them hard. Melisa gets the wind knocked out of her and she lies on the floor wincing in pain. Seizing her opportunity, Suzy grabs both of Melisa's hands and pulls them back. Melisa is on her knees and cannot do anything to get out of this position. Suzy continues to apply pressure and pull them back. Melisa shouts in pain. Suzy then puts her foot in the middle of Melisa's back and pulls at her hands. Tears of pain roll down from Melisa's eyes. Suzy says triumphantly "Do YOU give up, you skanky bitch! Or do do I have to break your back?". Melisa breathes in deeply and uses all her strength to straighten her arms and pull Suzy towards her. Suzy kicks Melisa in the abdomen and lets go of the hold. Suzy grabs Melisa by her hair and is about to slap her when Melisa catches Suzy's arm and twists it around. With her other hand Melisa grabs Suzy's hair and pushes her right into the wall. Suzy is dazed and a gash appears on her forehead. Melisa drops her to the floor and tears out her bra and starts mauling her breasts with both her hands. Suzy starts crying and bursts out "stop....you are hurting me..please stop"
Melisa grins and says "do you give up"
Suzy replies " yes (sob) i do...i do..pls let me go"

In front of Suzie we make love like never before. The whole weekend we had the best sex ever with best friend watching and vouching for it.


 

[Kayla]

A terrific story with some good trashtalking & exciting scenes! 

P.S. Did she remain your best friend though after that humiliating loss?  Tee hee! 

[koolswan]

Thanks for the feedback Kayla....to answer your question: yes after all, friends are forever lol 

[CrashCorrigan]

Absolutely excellent story, koolswan!  I loved the rivalry scenario, it's a natural we don't see that often.  Great descriptions of the girls and the fight scenes, good pacing and twists.  Please, write more!

[koolswan]

thanks CrashCorrigan, appreciate the feedback. Will surely try and write more.

[JT Edson]

Koolswan,

Great story. Well written and I loved the scenario. Please write more.

JT Edson

[koolswan]

Thanks JT, have started working on my story...really appreciate the feedback.

[koolswan]

Thanks JT, have started working on my new story...really appreciate the feedback.

[howardcosell]

It takes a really good friend to get beat, watch her best friend make love to the woman who beat her, and remain friends... hopefully, the best friend will ultimately win because best friends make best girlfriends... wait a minute... maybe they don't. 

PS- I loved the modified surfboard stretch at the end. Nice submission.

[koolswan]

lol...thanks howard for your views.

[howardcosell]

lol, it had occurred to me while typing my reply that i dated my bestie, but i married someone else lol. Sometimes, it is better to have that best friend to critique stuff and give me a different perspective... plus, my bestie is a loose cannon most of the time, and i don't feel as responsible for her as i would if we were married. 

[koolswan]

even i dated my best friend for some time during college but when u move on u realise that your tastes and likings have changed and mature and there is a lot to explore.