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Lost story: Sub vs. Dom

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Lost story: Sub vs. Dom
« on: March 01, 2016, 02:52:40 PM »
This is a story I did a long time ago, and thought I lost.  

My girlfriend Raven and I live the alternative lifestyle.  She craves submission from me, and is often obedient.  She is 24 years old with shoulder length dirty-blonde hair and beautiful sapphire eyes.  She is 5’7”, with b-cups and a killer curve.  She came to me wanting a one night stand, but fell hard for me, and I for her.  It has been a few months since I told her we are getting married, and she has been happier than she has ever been.

One night, we were invited to a party for all the local Doms and Subs.  These events were fun for me since it gave me a chance to meet some of my friends and enjoy good conversations that go along with really good drinks.  

That night, we arrived to the building on the party invite and took the elevator all the way to the top floor.  Raven was wearing a tight, silky black teddie that almost revealed all of her with ballerina high heels and her metal collar.  I was walking her by with a chain leash, and often smacked her ass to have her move faster.

Once we entered the room, I noticed most of the guests all huddled around in a circle and laughing.  As I made my way through the crowd I found out who they were all paying attention to.  Mistress Nadia, who just returned from India after visiting her parents was regaling all about her time there.  

Nadia was a famous Mistress in our town.  An underground internet model, she stood at 5’9” with medium long brown hair and emerald green eyes.  She was wearing a tight black business suit that was unbuttoned at the top to show off her 38 D's. She is well known for her aggressive nature among her slaves, and has a quite a collection of them.  There are rumors that her stable includes people of highest status, from the local police Chief to the Mayor.   Considering her pampered lifestyle, these rumors are quite easy to believe.

She looked at me as she was talking expecting me to laugh along with her somewhat humorous tale of her Brother’s wedding, but I really had no interest in hearing.  With my curiosity appeased, I casually walked away with Raven looking on for a moment more before following.  She quickly walked up to me with her head still down and told me that Nadia had a look of shock on her face when I choose not to listen.  This meant nothing to me, at the time, but little did I know, this would explode into something big by the end of the night.

A few hours passed and I was having quite the time with my friends.  We were sitting together having some drinks with our subs kneeling right beside us, ready to respond to our commands at a moment’s notice.  Suddenly, their attention darted to Nadia who had walked up to my side.  She stared at me for a moment, and then in a very polite tone said “Would you care to join me out at the balcony for a bit?  It’s quite a view, and I would enjoy the company.”  At first, I thought of declining, but seeing the look on my friends faces told me that they were already jealous that Nadia was talking to me and not them.  What better way to get under their skins even more than agreeing.
  
I tugged on Ravens collar and she instinctively got up and lowered her head as we began to walk to the balcony.
Once out on the balcony she turned to me with her arms crossed “You know, most people would never walk away from me when I am talking.  I have entertained some of the most highly regarded people in this city, and with just a few words, I could make or break you.”  I knew she was testing me to see how I would react.  “If you wanted to do that, you would have” I said in a calm tone.  “But you didn’t.  Instead you invited me to join you out here, alone.  This tells me that you want something else.”  

She stared at me for a moment in shock, and then smiled “You are very perceptive.   I will be frank then.  You interest me.”  She said as slowly walked towards me.  It was at this point that Raven lifted her head up and started to glare.  “Master, isn’t it about time we went home.  You promised you would take me shopping for a wedding dress tomorrow.”  Nadia paused and looked at her for a moment and then at me. “So your engaged to your slave?”  “Yes I am.” She nodded her head for a minute and then kissed me on the lips, pressing her chest against mine.  “Oh dear, you should know you could do so much better than that. Surely you would rather be with an actual woman than some pet.  I bet I can show you a few things she could never do”.

I was about to respond to her, when out of nowhere Raven pulled Nadia by her hair and slapped her across the face.  The sound echoed off the buildings walls, but fortunately no one in the party heard it.  The last thing I wanted was to be part of a public scene.   Nadia snapped her head to Raven with eyes filled with fire and hate. “You cheap whore” She spat, “You fucking dare to slap a mistress?!”  “You’re not my mistress you fat cow!” Raven replied with equal amount of venom in her words “And you will not touch my master again unless you want worse than that!”  Nadia laughed at this “You dumb skank.  I have dealt with the wives and husbands of some of my slaves, and every one of them knelt down and licked my boots in the end.  When I am done with you-“At this point I cut her off, putting an arm on both of them.  “I don’t think here is the best place to do this.  If you really want to fight her, then come with us back to our apartment.   You can settle it there.”  

Nadia looked like she was about to protest, but a glance at Raven smirking, and she agreed.  We were able to slip out of party without anyone noticing.  Nadia took her car and she followed behind us.  She calmly followed us up to our room and I closed the door behind her.  “Let’s make this more interesting” She said with a smirk. “Once I beat her, you will call off the wedding to this bitch, and you and I will start dating, as this mongrel spends the rest of her life as a servant girl”.  I thought it over for a moment, and one look at raven told me this infuriated her even more.  “Fine, but if you lose, the same stipulations will apply for you as well.”  She agreed and followed us into the bedroom.  
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Re: Lost story: Sub vs. Dom
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2016, 08:23:45 PM »
WELL! There's an interesting beginning to what is certainly looking the "beginning of a beautiful friendship"!

I hope this is the first part (and not one of those 'teases' that never delivers on its promise) of what looks to be a great story!

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Re: Lost story: Sub vs. Dom
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2016, 11:50:08 PM »
Let me echo what Ginny said...this is a great beginning and I really hope we're going to see more.

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Re: Lost story: Sub vs. Dom
« Reply #3 on: March 02, 2016, 02:09:26 AM »
The room was big enough to walk around even with the bed, and it was a good size for their fight.   They didn’t wait for any starting bell, and began to circle each other in the room.   Raven was the first to make a move lunging at Nadia and getting her in a bear hug.  Nadia winced for a few moments and gasped in pain before slamming her fist right into Ravens temple until she let go.  Raven staggered around the room for a few moments, and Nadia took this opportunity to kick her hard in her crotch with her high heeled shoes.  Raven gasped in pain and clutched her woman hood as Nadia sent another kick to her face knocking Raven to the floor.

Nadia jumps on top of her, and began to slap Ravens face until it was all red.  Raven got her feet under Nadia, and flipped her off long enough for her to stand back up.  Nadia attempted to get up, but Raven was already on her grabbing a handful of her hair and slamming her face hard into the floor several times.  She then pulled Nadia up by her hair and tossed her across the room and into the wall.  Nadia crumpled to the floor and began to rock back and forth gasping for air.  Raven walked over and was about to grab her hair again when Nadia sprang up and punched her hard in the stomach.  She tackled Raven into the bed post and started to punch her stomach repeatedly leaving raven screaming in pain. “I am going to fucking kill you whore!” she screamed into ravens face as she delivered an uppercut into ravens chin.  Raven sagged down into a slumping position breathing heavily and crying.  Nadia ripped off Ravens Teddy and wrapped it around her neck tightly.  Raven started to gasp, struggling to loosen the grip.  Her legs were flailing while trying to grab ahold of the cloth.  Nadia had a fiendish smile on her face and laughed as she tightened it “Take a nap cow.  By the time you wake up, I will have everything.  Your life, your obedience, and your man! And if you lick my boots really well, Mistress Nadia promises to let you sleep on the floor instead of outside!” 

   BAM!  Out of nowhere, while Nadia was occupied with gloating, Raven smashed her head into her face.  The Indian beauty was on the floor screaming through her hands as Raven scrambled to her feet and pulled off the outfit.   Raven had a look of pure rage in her eyes.  Nadia lit the fire in her, and she was now standing there as if she just started the fight.  She quickly sprinted towards Nadia and landed a full blown kick right into her stomach.  As Nadia was attempting to breath Raven grabbed both of her legs and began to kick repeatedly at the exposed crotch.  She even sent a few kicks to Nadia’s ass which brought equal amount of screaming and squealing from Nadia “Please! Stop! “She begged through gasps, but Raven wasn’t listening “You want my man? You want my life?! I will see you dead before that you fucking dirty slut!”  She screamed as she ripped off Nadia’s Top and grabbed the poor woman’s exposed breasts yanking them and twisting them.  “I am going to break these udders of yours u fucking cow! I am going to tear them off and used them as a god damn punching bag!”  She then began to punch both tits repeatedly smacking them around again and again until they were all bruised.  She then pulled Nadia up by her hair and dragged her full circle around the room parading the naked and battered woman.  She started to laugh as she punched Nadia’s face again and again, and Nadia was too weak to stop her.  She just stood there taking blow after blow after blow with a dumb look on her face.  Raven then cupped Nadia’s head into her hand and then sent a hard blow right into the center of the dazed girls face.  Nadia lay sprawled on the floor barley conscious and crying. 

Raven walked over and put her heeled shoe right on Nadia’s cheek.  “Lick them bitch.”  She spat.  Nadia looked into Ravens face with fear and began to lap at her feet.  She kept licking and sucked them as Raven shoved her foot hallway into her mouth.  “You’re ours now you fucking bitch.  You understand?!”  Nadia nodded her head too terrified to speak.  Raven had broken her.  She then pulled the Indian woman by her head and put her face into her crotch.  “Kiss my clit you worm.  Fucking please me now!”  Nadia was shaking as she kissed her clit, she was not used to being treated in such a way, but she knew she had no choice if she wanted the pain to stop.  She kissed Ravens clit and stroked it with her tongue.  Raven moaned in pleasure rocking back and forth pushing Nadia’s face in deeper.  She finally gasped really loud and exploded all across the battered woman’s face.  Nadia was in a daze from it, and tried to lick the cum off her face.  Raven smiled and me and silently said “I Love you” as she pulled Nadia by her hair forcing her to crawl on all fours.  She brought Nadia right to me and ordered her to pull my cock out of my pants with her teeth.  Nadia obeyed pulling it out and staring at how hard it was.  Raven slapped her face hard “Not for you!” she said as Nadia whimpered from the pain.  She pushed Nadia onto the floor and sat right on her face.  “Clean out my asshole bitch, and then I might let you have some” Nadia began to lick obediently.  Raven took her hand and stroked my cock before sucking on it.   She then used her freehand and pushed it into Nadia’s Exposed Pussy.  Nadia began to moan loudly from this, and licked ravens asshole faster.  Raven in turn, sucked on my cock harder and harder until it felt like I was about to explode. 

She then gets up leaving Nadia there to rub her own pussy excitedly.  “Please…..please don’t stop.”  She whimpers to us as she frantically tries to cum.  Raven smiled and grinds her heels into her crotch, causing the Indian woman’s pussy to explode a massive amount of juices.  Her body twitches a bit afterwards and she passes out.  Raven kissed me on the neck and begs me to take her.  We spend the rest of the night in the bed fucking rapidly until neither of us can go on.

I wake up around 1 PM and walk into the kitchen to see Raven eating a bowl of cereal while Nadia was eating her pussy from under the table.  Nadia is completely naked, and is wearing one of Ravens old worn out collars around her neck.  “Good morning master.” She says with a smile.   “I hope you don’t mind that I didn’t wake you.  You seemed like you really needed some sleep after last night.”  Strode across the room and kissed her on the neck as she embraces me with one arm.  “Mmmm I hope we can still go dress shopping today.  I already got our new toy all cleaned up and ready to be shown off.  And don’t worry about her former life.  I already had her call up all of her slaves and tell them she will no longer need them.  Isn’t that right cxnt? “She pulls up Nadia’s face gently by the chin and strokes one of the bruised checks.  “Yes mistress.  I won’t see anyone else other than you and master.  So please….can I please have his cock now?” Raven looked at me, and I nodded.  “I want both of you working on my cock.  And we don’t leave until both of your faces are covered in cum.”  They both smiled, and Nadia began to crawl over to my crotch with Raven doing the same.
After an hour, we are all ready to leave.  Raven places her neck out smiling as I put the leash on her collar, and Nadia does the same when Raven puts her leash on.  She kisses Nadia and the new slave moans at her mistresses’ touch. “Now you’re going to follow on all fours like the filthy cow you are, understand slave?”  Nadia nods her head and gets on all fours and begins to crawl as we walk out of the apartment.  I grab raven by her hair and yank her in for a kiss.  She kisses back and puts her head down smiling.  “Come on whores!” I shout to both of them as they begin to move faster.   Raven may be a slave, but she is one vicious mean bitch…. And I wouldn’t have her any other way.

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Re: Lost story: Sub vs. Dom
« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2016, 02:47:32 AM »
THANK YOU!!

Every bit as expected....and then some!

I hope I'll be reading more from you here in the future!!! (nicely done)