Not a bad start! Both women are attractive, and there is some good ground action. A few suggestions:
Lose the mattresses. The women constantly struggle to maintain their balance on those damn mattresses as they move around each other. Invest in some gym mats. Use the interlocking kind, or, if ya wanna go cheap, get some long gym mats and tape 'em together.
Hairpulling. If you've been on this board for ten years, you know how important hairpulling is to catfight aficionados. Wrestling matches are OK, but we're really looking for hairpulling catfights. Nuff said.
Topless. If this fight had been topless, with all the body-to-body action, it would have really raised the "hotness quotient". You are marketing this on c4s, where most of the women display some form of nudity. Non-topless, you appeal only to female fight enthusiasts. Topless, and the fight will appeal to a much wider audience.
Kudos, and best of luck in your production ventures!