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IrinaSF · « **on:** March 10, 2023, 02:39:36 PM »

My first story attempt - be kind

Rocko23 · « **Reply #1 on:** March 10, 2023, 03:55:33 PM »

That was a good enjoyable fight. I liked how vicious it was and the relative private nature of it. Is it fantasy or based on RL?

HumanPerson · « **Reply #2 on:** March 11, 2023, 02:02:10 AM »

Fantastic writing. I'm not a fan of that much blood and brutality, but it was really easy to get into the conflict and pick a character to root for.

kelllyclaws · « **Reply #3 on:** March 11, 2023, 02:16:32 AM »

it was great story. Can not wait to read what you do next.

botgeek · « **Reply #4 on:** March 11, 2023, 04:41:48 PM »

Very nice!

sinclairfan · « **Reply #5 on:** March 11, 2023, 10:55:53 PM »

I liked the pre-pre-fight naked staredown in the showers. Perfect way to meet and size up a potential opponent in the gym.

JuliaVargas · « **Reply #6 on:** March 12, 2023, 02:45:36 PM »

Terrific writing. Congrats.

lifeofriley · « **Reply #7 on:** March 19, 2023, 11:39:12 PM »

please don't stop at this!

what a great story

DiosaCubanaFuente · « **Reply #8 on:** March 21, 2023, 01:20:23 AM »

My first story attempt - be kind

Am i the only one who doesnt see story?

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