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Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door

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Offline TRE

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So I thought I'd write something about this very brutal fight I saw my older sister have with the girl next door. My family never got on with these neighbours next door, standard neighbour problems really, they were noisy and had a lot of parties. They were a rough family but nothing serious ever happened before.

I'll put this here because I don't know where else to put it:
My older sister was 20 at the time, she's about 5'3 and quite slim with brown hair.
The neighbour she fought was 21 I think, she's a single mum, also around 5'3 and slim, she's also a brunette.

This all started one morning because my sister got into an argument with the woman next door, who was the mother of the girl she fought. It was just a petty argument about their parties and rubbish being outside our house, but things got personal and they were insulting each other etc. That came to nothing, but in the afternoon that same day, just after our parents went out in the car, the daughter from next door was standing outside our house staring in, when my sister saw her she went out the front, the neighbour walked towards her and started shouting, "why are you insulting my mum" and shouting and swearing. They argued for a little bit, then suddenly the neighbour throws a big punch, and hits my sister clean in the face, my sister then comes forward putting the neighbour on the back foot, both throwing wild punches for a few seconds until the neighbour was able to take my sister down to the ground. Fully sat on top of my sister now, she was wildly throwing punches, lots landed and lots didn't. My sister on the bottom was desperately trying to get up and stop the punches, pulling her opponents head down by her hair to make it harder to punch. My sister failed to get up but eventually the neighbour slowed down, she clearly was tired and my sister managed to roll over and get on top. Now it was her turn to dish it out. At this point however she was also tired and her punches were slower and less frequent. Eventually it got to the point where they were both so tired and it was just my sister lying on top of the neighbour, both had hands in each others hair but the hits mostly stopped. Finally the neighbour turned over and got my sister off from on top of her and now they were both lying on their sides, both pulling hair and kicking each other. This stalemate was how the fight ended, with the neighbour saying "get off me bitch" and after a few words exchanged they both let go and the neighbour went on her way.

I haven't  talked much to my sister about the fight, but it was very violent, they both fought like wild cats. My sister had 2 black eyes and the other girl walked off with a bleeding nose. It must have only lasted a few minutes, but it felt like a lot longer because of how scrappy it was.

Thanks for reading and please ask questions.

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Offline JT Edson

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2023, 05:17:21 PM »
This sounds like a h@ll of a fight. What were they wearing during the fight? Did they ever go at it again? Has your sister had other catfights?

I look forward to your reply.

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Offline TRE

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2023, 09:37:59 PM »
This sounds like a h@ll of a fight. What were they wearing during the fight? Did they ever go at it again? Has your sister had other catfights?

I look forward to your reply.

If I remember correctly they both were wearing T-shirts, My sister had jeans and the other girl was wearing shorts. Unfortunately they didn't fight again, I think most likely because of the damage they caused each other because they hated each other after that. It would have been good to see how a fight would have gone between them if my sister was more ready. And also yeah she has had some other fights before.

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2023, 05:58:59 PM »
Sounds like a great fight.  A few questions if I may.  When the neighbor had your sister down, were you worried that she might lose?  If it became clear to you she was losing, would you have broken it up?  Have you ever talked to her about the fight?  Would she be willing to try the neighbor again, or is she intimidated.  If there wss a rematch, does she think she could win?  Who do you think would win, honestly?  And you say your sister has had other fights.  Has she ever lost?  Thanks.

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #4 on: April 16, 2023, 08:13:11 PM »
Sounds like a great fight.  A few questions if I may.  When the neighbor had your sister down, were you worried that she might lose?  If it became clear to you she was losing, would you have broken it up?  Have you ever talked to her about the fight?  Would she be willing to try the neighbor again, or is she intimidated.  If there wss a rematch, does she think she could win?  Who do you think would win, honestly?  And you say your sister has had other fights.  Has she ever lost?  Thanks.

Thanks for the reply. Yeah when she was down I was worried but I could see she was trying to get up and fight back, so at that time I wasn't going to break it up because I knew she had a chance to comeback, if she was just lying on the floor getting beat up without trying to fight back I probably would have broken it up.
I've spoken to her a little bit about the fight. I don't think she's intimidated by the neighbour, when I asked if she would fight her again she said "maybe" I think she would, but she isn't going to go looking to fight her again. Whether she would win a rematch, I think she definitely could because after getting sucker punched and being hit on the floor she came back and didn't really lose the fight, even though that day she probably got a bit worse of it. But it would be a close fight and could go either way but I would lean towards my sister beating her in a rematch.
Also yeah, she has had some other fights, some she won and some she lost.

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #5 on: April 17, 2023, 02:55:10 AM »
Thanks for the answers.  Seems like the neighbor may be a little stronger than your sister, but your sis is a real scrapper.  Did you see any of her other fights?

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #6 on: April 17, 2023, 10:23:56 AM »
Thanks for the answers.  Seems like the neighbor may be a little stronger than your sister, but your sis is a real scrapper.  Did you see any of her other fights?

I would say its the other way around, and if they fought again I wouldn't be surprised if it was another draw, but I do lean towards my sister. And yeah I have seen 2 of her other fights, she won 1 and lost the other, she also had another one I didn't see where she lost.

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #7 on: April 17, 2023, 11:07:28 PM »
Your sister sounds tough. She hung in there after taking a beating. Would love to hear about her other fights.

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Offline TRE

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2023, 11:39:46 AM »
Your sister sounds tough. She hung in there after taking a beating. Would love to hear about her other fights.

Ok, I can't say as much about them but here,

The first fight she had was the one I saw her lose, she was sticking up for her friend, but this other girl was quite a lot heavier than her, it wasn't a violent fight or anything, the other girl just took her down and sat on her.
The next fight she had was against this proper bitch she didn't like for a long time, it started out with mostly hairpulling but my sister beat her quite badly in the end.
The other fight she had was over a guy, that is the one I didn't see but apparently she lost.

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Offline Fighting Lisa

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #9 on: April 19, 2023, 12:33:39 AM »
Your sister sounds tough. She hung in there after taking a beating. Would love to hear about her other fights.

Ok, I can't say as much about them but here,

The first fight she had was the one I saw her lose, she was sticking up for her friend, but this other girl was quite a lot heavier than her, it wasn't a violent fight or anything, the other girl just took her down and sat on her.
The next fight she had was against this proper bitch she didn't like for a long time, it started out with mostly hairpulling but my sister beat her quite badly in the end.
The other fight she had was over a guy, that is the one I didn't see but apparently she lost.

Glad to hear she at least kicked the mega-bitch's ass. Haha. How do you think I'd fare against her?

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #10 on: April 19, 2023, 02:36:06 AM »
Did it bother her to lose a fight in front of you?  Did the other girl make her say she gave up?  And did she ever talk about the fight she lost that you didn’t see?

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Offline TRE

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #11 on: April 19, 2023, 03:05:16 PM »
Did it bother her to lose a fight in front of you?  Did the other girl make her say she gave up?  And did she ever talk about the fight she lost that you didn’t see?

It probably did but she didn't say anything about it, and no she didn't verbally give up. She didn't talk to me about the other fight either.

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Re: Short Story About My Sister's Fight Against The Girl Next Door
« Reply #12 on: April 19, 2023, 04:21:22 PM »
Your sister sounds tough. She hung in there after taking a beating. Would love to hear about her other fights.

Ok, I can't say as much about them but here,

The first fight she had was the one I saw her lose, she was sticking up for her friend, but this other girl was quite a lot heavier than her, it wasn't a violent fight or anything, the other girl just took her down and sat on her.
The next fight she had was against this proper bitch she didn't like for a long time, it started out with mostly hairpulling but my sister beat her quite badly in the end.
The other fight she had was over a guy, that is the one I didn't see but apparently she lost.

Glad to hear she at least kicked the mega-bitch's ass. Haha. How do you think I'd fare against her?

You get your ass beat by her just like if you fought me!