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Great work on remaking this classic Zora vs Vida gypsy fight scene.  You hold true to the original fight but expand it nicely in much greater detail.   You really capture the essence of their intense savagery as well as the erotic sensuality of their wild fight.   I like the hay bales and sack piles used to border the area and how you allow them to fight on or near these objects.   I’m glad the amount of blood is limited since too much of that would turn me off completely.   I like the escalation to fighting fully nude and I agree with the other person’s comment about the quality of pic 128.  For me, pics 139 to 142 are also excellent. 

As to what happens next, I don’t recall how it ended in the book, but in your remake I’d like to see it last a bit longer because it’s that good and they’ve just arrived at being fully nude.  It would be a variation of what happened in the story, but maybe when the shooting starts, the girls separate and head for cover but then find themselves alone, maybe in a barn or someplace else out of sight of everyone.   Still full of wild hate and lust, they continue their fight in private using all sorts of dirty tactics until one finally wins or they both pass out from exhaustion.

Thanks for the compliments, I’m glad you like my artwork. The idea of them fighting it out to a finish in private….I like that a lot!

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In desperation Zora manages to catch Vida's arm that is holding the bottle at the wrist.  They struggle briefly before Zora rolls Vida off of her and off of the table while still grasping Vida's Vida's wrist.  They land on the ground hard with Zora now on top. Vida has managed to hold onto the bottle but it has broken in half when they crashed to the ground, leaving Vida holding the deadly jagged remains. She attempts to slash Zora's throat, but Zora is still holding onto the arm with the now deadly weapon at the wrist. Zora has taken control of this fight to the death now. While stradling Vida's waist she has grasped Vida's other arm at the wrist and now has control of both of her rivals arms and forces them above her head. Leaning down with her teeth bared Zora bites into the left side of Vida's neck. Shaking her head like an animal she rips a piece of Vida's throat out. Blood gushes from the fatal wound.  Vida struggles briefly before, with Zora still hold onto her wrist, her life blood drains away.  Vida tilts her head to the right and with her eyes wide open in shock she dies. Zora feels the once strong struggling body beneath her go limp. Zora releases Vida's wrist. She leans back and raises her arms in victory. She screams: "I have beaten her!.. He's mine!.. I have killed this Bitch!"
A voice from the crowd of Gypsy"s responds  "It is Zora!.. Zora has won!.. She has killed Vida!"  Bond and Karim Bey sit silently but are not shocked by this carnage. No they both understand this vicous death struggle very well.  It's kill or be killed.  Although he'd prefer women not to participate this way, Bond is seasoned double O agent and has survived his own fights to the death more than once.

Or you could have one of them surrender and be banished. I have always had a preference for a Zora victory, but of course this is your work.

I think you should add the neck bite scene into your work somehow. That way you'd be paying homage both the movie and the book. In the book Vida is about to bite into Zora's neck when the shots ring out.  The feralness of this scene has always intrigued me, with one fighter about to rip her rivals throat out. It is a "Catfight" to the death or submission after all.

Wow! Great ideas here. I don’t think anyone has realised yet, but Zora is on top and brandishing the bottle in my version! I thought about keeping them partially clothed so people would notice. Thought it would be cool to alternate things a little! I definitely want to add the neck bite moment. The idea that the two women are fighting with each other so desperately as to then bite an opponents neck is totally wild. Thanks for the suggestions!

[jackie]

This is just fantastic artwork, really bringing the whole fight to life. I love the twist of Zora being on top with the bottle and when I had looked at the final frame again, I thought that was the case. It would be great for them to separate at the gun shots and meet again in private to go at each other once more. To finish it with a neck scene would be superb and, from a personal preference, I hope it is Zora who finishes Vida off.
Amazing work.

[Dalia.Scribe]

Great artwork and great imagination ... I saw this movie for the first time back in 2010 and since then i was wondering what would happen if they kept fighting ..  Thank to you i can see now what would happen 

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Great artwork and great imagination ... I saw this movie for the first time back in 2010 and since then i was wondering what would happen if they kept fighting ..  Thank to you i can see now what would happen 

Thanks, the continuation of the fight will be posted soon!

[aresseraares]

This is one of the most amazing artworks I've ever seen.

Masterpiece. Thanks a lot for it!

[Toothandnail]

This is one of the most amazing artworks I've ever seen.

Masterpiece. Thanks a lot for it!

Thanks! The next part of the fight is coming this week. 

[Toothandnail]

Hi, thanks for some great ideas and responses to the cliff hanger, it has totally helped to shape the direction of the fight! I really hope my version is doing the original some kind of justice. I could quite happily keep making this brawl go on for a while, but I don't want it to start getting boring at all, so in the next instalment I may try wrapping things up. I can also then turn my attention to my next classic catfight remake! (Clue: both fighters wear black lingerie.....) Same as ever, any suggestions for dirty fighting tactics or things you would like to see happen, please post them on here and I'll try and work them in to the fight. Thanks for the likes. Enjoy....T&N

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Turning the tables...

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Crash landing....

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By any means...

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Far from finished...

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I'll kill you....

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....not if I kill you first...

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Fighting dirty...