[Laurie Breeze]

You've outdone yourself with this one, Joni.



Marie

Wow, I'm agreeing with Marie. Never saw that coming!   

~L~

[peccavi]

instant ticket to the hall of fame . Great story, and I am glad to have had a cameo role, even as a wicked witch. I wish all our lives could be fixed like yours was in the story.

[Kayla]

Whatta hot story - excitedly written interspersed with poetry - great stuff; though a sad, heart wrencing ending: surely; it can't really be 'The End' of Joni? 

Hugs
Katja

[Jonica]

Thank y'all so much for the very kind comments.  This was a very fun story to write.  There were so many directions it could have gone in, and I really enjoyed the way I decided to take it.  This is, of course, a sequel to Laurie Breeze's story Bad Night in the Black Hills.  I would like to thank everyone who allowed me to victimize them in this story, I really love to use forum members to add some flavor to my stories, and this one wouldn't have been possible without them (I will include a 'Cast of Characters' credits list in the next day or two).  Be on the lookout for a third part in the upcoming weeks written by the one and only Gemma Rox.  As you know, Gemma has a unique style that cannot be duplicated.  It will be a wild ride for sure.

*hugs*

Joni
xoxo

[mphsblues]

I finally finished this!  Wow! is all I can say!  You are a tremendous talent.  I hope you are not wasting it.  Write a novel or something.  You need to be read.

[Jonica]

Thank yo both for your very kind comments!



J
xoxo

[Jonica]

Closing Credits

Joni:  That would be me.  I think you can find my profile.

Joe:  Poor Joe is still my personal whipping post.  He is based on a real life person

Laurie:  The incomparable Laurie Breeze.  

Gemma:  Mi amore, the one…the only….  Gemma Rox

Marie B:  The minute Canadian crippler Marie B

Jenn Peccavi:  The Bad Bitch of Rue Bourbon is none other then the Big Bad Sweetie of FCF peccavi

Kayla:  Marie B’s partner in crime and other places, the South African killing machine Kayla

Kitten:  The girl who caused Joe to break my heart.  I’m not finished with her, either.  I also hope Beaten slut remembers us asking for her permission to play Kitten more than a year ago!

Batgirl:  One of the more interesting roles in the story, and an intriguing character in the story and irl, Ash

Rylie:  The leader of the biker gang chasing after Batgirl.  Everyone’s favorite Amazon, Rylie Knight

My mother:  Portrayed by my mother.  Pretty self-explanatory.  

Big Black Hulking Guy:  The owner of the nightclub where Gemma and I nearly met our maker.  Then he made us scream like we were *blush* BlackHulk

Chrisssy:  The girl who nearly beat the shit out of Gemma and I in Hulk’s club, Chrissssssssy

The Bitchy Cop:  One of my nemesis on FCF.  The one real bitch I have found here.  I hate her worse than Kitten, Justine_ccsd

The Bitchy Cop’s Bitchy Partner:  Another one you have to watch real close…just like her pal Justine, Amanda Penn

The uppity, classless, bitchy Southern belle:  One of the bright spots of the story, and one of the nicest people on FCF…until you step in a ring with her!  Ouch time!  lorielou

Sam and Piny:  These two clowns (Ruffians, as they call themselves) are inseparable in the chat room, so they should be introduced here too, samsoni and pinyatoo

I would like to thank each and everyone of the members who allowed themselves to be victimized for this story!  This site wouldn’t be the same without them!  They are the ones who add color to the place and make it so much fun!  I love you all!!

Joni
xoxo

Songs Quoted or Otherwise Used

Chapter 5:  

The Wino and I Know
Written and performed by Jimmy Buffett

Leaving Louisiana in the Broad Daylight
Written by Rodney Crowell
Performed by Emmylou Harris

Chapter 14:

Beautiful Beautiful
Written by Francesca Battistelli, Ian Eskelin, Andrew Fromm,
Performed by Francesca Battistelli

Chapter 15:

Love Story
Written and performed by Taylor Swift

[T aka Tony]

pou vou Jonica 

[Laurie Breeze]

Thanks T! 

This story so needed to be brought back to the first page....Not because I'm in it or it's the second part of our series ...

A Clockwork Strawberry is one of the wildest, most creative, most unpredictable, most amazing stories I've ever read! If it was a book it would be a page turner, I guess here it would be a scroll-downer (?)     This story cries out to be published or at least made into a movie or both! (I want Jordan Ladd to play me....we're both short 'n we're both from South Dakota! Her mom Cheryl Ladd was born here.)

Another Jonica Master Class in writing story!!!

hugggzzz 'n xoxoxo

~L~