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Aurora's Game

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Offline TheScribbler

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Aurora's Game
« on: September 13, 2015, 10:21:22 PM »
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« Last Edit: January 31, 2016, 08:31:16 PM by peccavi »

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Re: Aurora's Game
« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2015, 11:27:03 PM »
I think I remember reading this the first time but I felt I should comment. Excellent story, well-written. Thanks.

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Re: Aurora's Game
« Reply #2 on: September 14, 2015, 12:13:32 AM »
Firstly, it's great to see you back on FCF.

Second, yes I agree...a great story, in your inimitable style. Thank you for sharing.

Finally, I look forward to all your proposed re-posts. It will, of course, take some time to accomplish - but, without a shadow of a doubt, they will be worth waiting for.

Take care.

GG

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Re: Aurora's Game
« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2015, 05:35:05 AM »
Very nice story there! Well described. I love the essence of the rivalry
The best way to settle rivalries between bitter rivals is to get down and dirty and let the claws talk...

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Re: Aurora's Game
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2015, 10:45:37 AM »
As all your work, a Masterpiece.

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Re: Aurora's Game
« Reply #5 on: September 27, 2015, 02:15:35 AM »
                                                        A Michelle Review
                                                                  by
                                          The Gorgeous and Vivacious Michelle

                                                        “Aurora’s Game”
                                                                  by
                                                    The Scribbler, Esquire


This is story number one in the “Ruth and Aurora” Series and right off the bat I highly recommend it as this sets the table for a series of future tales that I promise…you won’t be able to put down.  I love the character development by Scribbler and how it melds beautifully with a plot that has more twists and turns than Manhattan traffic at rush hour!

We are introduced to someone I grew to despise as I have read each entry in the series…Aurora….

What type of woman is she…other than a FUCKING WHORE?

WOW…do I sound biased?

This story will do that to you...and that is what makes it…and the entire series…so special…

Let’s me quote a few lines from the story that helps describe EXACTLY what type of woman Aurora is...

“With an inward smile, she bent forward a little further, letting her small but well shaped breasts swing temptingly inside the top of her brief, pastel orange bikini, showing off her body to Dario, who still pretended not to look.  Taking some more lotion, she began to rub it into her chest and the upper slopes of her bosom, slipping her hands inside the spaghetti straps of her bikini.  She felt her own nipples harden a little, pressing at the flimsy fabric, and she wondered if he had noticed.  She glanced at him behind her sunglasses and noticed the stiffness in his neck as he “read” the newspaper.  Of course he had noticed.”

Dario…in case you are wondering…is NOT Aurora’s husband…in fact she is married to someone else.  Dario is married to one…Ruth.

Starting to get the picture now?

To say Aurora despises Ruth would be a gross understatement.  That deep seeded hate…that unbridled envy…goes to the heart of the story…

As you can already see…Aurora WANTS Dario…

One might guess she wants Dario simply because Ruth is married to him…and she will do ANYTHING to step into Ruth’s spot because of that. To quote the story:

“She smiled again to herself.  She loved to tease Dario.  It was an amusing, exciting and ultimately harmless game”

Or was it?

Aurora decided to take that step into temptation!  It’s a step we all have the opportunity of taking at some point in our lives.  Most of us don’t because we’re scared…we’re afraid to take a chance and stand up for ourselves…but on that faithful day…Aurora not only TOOK the “step”…she fucking basically took a FLYING LEA at Ruth…as our story tells us…


“On a wicked impulse, she decided to give him some even better entertainment.  Slowly and deliberately, she reached behind her back and pulled loose the knot that held her bikini top in place, letting her breasts fall free”


Unfortunately Ruth saw Aurora’s little strip tease…

But lead us not into temptation…
But deliver us from evil…

“She and Ruth had disliked each other from the moment they met and now, forced to live together here on the little ranch, needling Dario’s wife was one of her favorite pastimes.”

Ruth goes to DEFCON 3!!!

An argument ensues with an intensity that builds to a crescendo and The Scribbler slowly draws us in with the wonderfully descriptive dialogue…forcing us to take sides in a confrontation we all KNOW is coming.

These two women have wanted to rip each other to shreds for a long time…and Scribbler has just lit the fuse and tossed a little gasoline on the slow building fire as it grows to an inferno!

DING DING!!

We are treated in the beginning to one of the best pool fights since Alexis vs. Krystle in the TV series…”Dynasty”…

That is all I am going to tell you about it as I recommend you read the story!  You will be treated to one of the best catfights ever put in the printed word.  This isn’t just a fight…it’s a reckoning…a war that will have far reaching implications as we move into subsequent chapters of this series.  

You will be shocked…aroused…pissed off…

You will feel the gambit of emotions…and that is how it should be and what we have come to expect from the best writer of this genre…Scribbler.

You will feel a range of emotions like you have NEVER felt…all due to the wonderful character descriptions and development by Scribbler…

In other words…another masterpiece by the master...

But we have come to expect little else by this Pulitzer Prize winning author...

And I bet you thought with all the “masters” I was tossing about… I was going to somehow fit “masturbator” in this somehow…

HA!

But you will be "pleasured" after you read this story...

Michelle says…check it out…its well worth your time…as will be the other entries in this series.  You’ll find yourself not able to stop yourself from going to the next entry after finishing the previous one…just to see what happens next.  You WILL find yourself so invested in these two main characters that will surprise you.

As I said…give it a read…you won’t regret the time you took to do so!
« Last Edit: September 27, 2015, 02:18:19 AM by Michelle »
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