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The Nanny

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Offline beatnbear999

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The Nanny
« on: May 14, 2016, 10:30:49 PM »
Decided to try my hand at writing. Think my imagination is pretty good, but putting I words, not sure. I have about a half dozen ideas, pretty much all centering around wives fighting. Feedback would be great, to let me know if it's worth pursuing
Part1 below
Part 2 to follow shortly


The Nanny,

Tracey is a tall beautiful woman.  5’8 125lbs, with jet black hair and an envious 36c 24 36 figure, turning heads at 40 just as she did at 20. She seemingly had it all. She had made partner at her whit e shoe law firm, not just as the first woman..but as the youngest partner ever. She was married to her college sweetheart, an ex-baseball player and super salesman, Marcus. He was forty also, but kept himself in the same shape as college. He had gone from an entry level salesman to corporate sales director in 12 years, and between them the made fabulous money.
The year had started off wonderfully, both getting big raises, both hitting 40, and their oldest child turning 10. Marcus had made plans for a big vacation, and Tracey was trying to work out the time off at work. She was very happy, but, something troubled her in the pit of her stomach. They had originally gone through 5 nannies until they had settled on Ilene. The first ones had been too young, too irresponsible, and too flirty. Ilene was 42, and though she was a very pretty redhead, Tracey didn’t really consider her as a threat. Ilene kept herself in shape, not by working out, but by looking after the children. She was 5’5 118lbs, with a stunning 34D 24 34 figure.
Marcus had requested Ilene come with the family on their vacation, and for the extra pay, Ilene had been quite happy to. Tracey was a bit miffed about that. And had Marcus been spending too much time with Ilene lately? Tracey wasn’t sure, but it began to gnaw at her. She had had to fight off two rivals for Marcus before, one in college, and one when he was a minor league ballplayer, before his injury ended his career, and started him down the sales road. She felt as though she shouldn’t need to anymore…but felt fully capable of doing so, especially against Ilene.
The family went on the trip, to Mexico, where they had honeymooned 17 years ago. Ilene, being fair skinned, was constantly covered, and spent most of her time taking care of the children, 10 year old Amy, and 7 year old John. Marcus and Tracey got to relax and work on their tans, which had been part of Marcus’ plan. The other part, which Tracey did not yet know, was to spend some romantic time with Tracey, without the children. On the second night of vacation, the resort was having a pool party. Marcus and Tracey went in their skimpy outfits, and after much crying and begging, the children were allowed to go. Ilene accompanied them, again allowing Tracey and Marcus alone time.

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Offline DogWithABone

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Re: The Nanny
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2016, 08:43:12 AM »
Solid setup, will be interesting to see how you get to the fight with the nanny.
RIP the account of Sophie Cees.

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Re: The Nanny
« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2016, 08:47:21 AM »
continue, please  :)

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Offline blue338

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Re: The Nanny
« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2016, 06:41:28 PM »
Definitely the start of a good story.  Looking forward to part 2 to see where it goes.

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The Nanny
« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2016, 09:28:20 PM »
Part 2 (hopefully concluding shortly)

Tracey was enjoying her second rum and coke, when she heard some stirrings at the pool entrance. She looked over, and saw her children coming into the pool, followed by…Ilene, in an outfit that left almost nothing to the imagination! Immediately, Tracey was livid, more so when she saw Marcus gawking at Ilene. Tracey sulked and brooded the rest of the evening, much to Marcus’ displeasure.
When the pool party was still going, Ilene gathered the children, and brought them up to their room, supposedly ending her night. But Tracey followed them, with Marcus in tow. Tracey waited until the children were soundly asleep, and then she confronted Ilene, both still in their pool attire. “What was this outfit! You feel that was appropriate to wear that in front of my children?” Ilene felt a bit embarrassed “I’m sorry Tracey, I…” Tracey cut her off “That’s MRS. Hampton to you”. Ilene was surprised, she had been told to call her employers Tracey and Marcus. “I’m sorry Ms Hampton, but..” again she was cut off “MRS.” “Tracey what are you going on about, we’re Tracey and Marcus to Ilene” said Marcus. Turning to Marcus, Tracey had venom in her voice “And I suppose that inviting this slut was your chance to find some informal time with her in a romantic setting”.
Now Ilene was red-faced, in anger more than anything. “What are you talking about Tracey, there is nothing between me and Marcus” Not that Ilene would not have welcomed it. Marcus after all was a very handsome, successful man, and Ilene had been alone (excluding a date here and there) since her divorce 10 years prior. “Don’t’ give me that innocent routine..I’ve seen you and Marcus together, when you think you’re alone” “Tracey.. you’re drunk!” shouted Marcus at her. “Not too drunk to toss this whore out of our lives” Retorted Tracey.
Ilene stepped up to Tracey “Tracey, I hope you are drunk, because otherwise I won’t tolerate your name calling, even if it cost me my job” “Tracey poked her finger into Ilene’s large boob “Then do something about it SLUT!” Ilene looked at Marcus, who shook his head “Ilene, I would just leave it alone..go to your room and both of you can cool off” Secretly Marcus was really looking to see his wife in action again, but felt that she would really hurt Ilene, and he didn’t want that. Ilene looked back at Tracey “you are lucky Marcus doesn’t want you to get hurt..you big Bitch!”

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Re: The Nanny
« Reply #5 on: May 16, 2016, 01:29:03 AM »
I always love the use of the word "slut" to demean a jobber.  And I'm hoping Ilene ends up being a jobber in this case and the recipient of a vicious, one sided beating.  Ahh...a man can only dream...

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Offline JT Edson

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Re: The Nanny
« Reply #6 on: May 16, 2016, 02:46:09 PM »
This is an awesome start to the story. I like the scenario. I hope you will treat us sometime to Tracey's earlier catfight. They sound like they might be hot as well. I can hardly wait for the next installment of this one.

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« Reply #7 on: May 16, 2016, 06:43:31 PM »
Final part, hope it lives up to the buildup


With that, Tracey grabbed Ilene’s red hair with one hand, and slapped her face with the other. Ilene cried out in pain, her hair being yanked, and a red hand print on her face. Tracey put her free hand in Ilene’s hair, and then flung the redhead across the room, by her hair. Ilene shriek as her hair was pulled, then grunted as she hit the wall, sinking to one knee. Tracey was on her quickly “I’ll teach you to mess with another woman’s ma…” Before she could finish, Ilene sent a fist into the attacked raven haired beauties belly, stopping her in her tracks, and driving the wind from her. Ilene rose from her knee, upper-cutting Tracey with a second punch, this one to Tracey’s jaw. Tracey’s head snapped up, she moaned, and fell onto her back, dazed. Marcus was amazed, as he had expected the flame haired beauty to go down quickly, and now she had turned the tables on his wife.
Ilene hesitated for a second, as she saw a tent forming in Marcus’ swim suit. She knew that reaction well. In the neighborhood were she grew up, Ilene had been in more than a few fights, and had seen the guys get excited as they watched. Ilene recovered, and went back after Tracey. She had liked the couple, but always felt sorry for Marcus, since Tracey worked long hours, and Marcus tried to be as romantic as possible, around her schedule. And with all the name calling, Ilene was now furious. She straddled Tracey, then reached down, grabbing  her raven hair, and pulling her face up, Ilene was about to deliver a fist right to Tracey’s nose, when she shrieked and dropped Tracey, falling to the side, and holding her groin. Tracey’s foot came down from kicking up into Ilene’s pussy. Tracey recovered now, and went on the attack, she rolled Ilene onto her back, then stomped on Ilene’s large tits, seemingly trying to pop them. Ilene was crying now, but when Tracey went to kick at her, Ilene was able to grab Tracey’s foot and trio her up.
Tracey landed on the carpeted floor with a thud, and Ilene rolled away to regroup and recover. The warring beauties got to their feet “This needs to end now” Marcus said, as he tried to intercede. “Stay out of this Marcus, this is between me and your Slut” Tracey shot back. “Stupid bitch” Ilene growled at Tracey “I never did anything with Marcus, but if you insist that we did, I might as well , after I rip your tits off!”
With that Tracey screamed and charge. As did Ilene. They met in the center of the room, clashing.. Tracey’s slight weight advantage allowed her to force Ilene backwards. Tracey kept driving forward, until Ilene’s back hit the wall. Tracey smiled, grabbing Ilene’s hair and banging her head into the wall. The redhead let out a loud groan, then brought her knee up quick and hard, catching the black haired beauties, thigh. Witch made her yelp and hope back, her leg losing feeling from the blow. Ilene brought her fists up again, and sent a blow into each of Tracey’s magnificent mammaries. Tracey howled and backed off. Ilene came after, and hit with 2 more punches, another tit blow, and a solid fist to Tracey’s belly. Tracey sank to her knees.
Marcus though his lovely bride was done for, as Ilene grabbed her hair and drew back for another punch. But Tracey always had a will of steel. She managed to lock both hands together, and drive them up into Ilene’s unprotected pussy. Ilene cried out, and fell to her knee in front of Tracey. Facing her rival, Tracey made the move she thought would end the fight. Ripping of the tiny top that Ilene was wearing, Tracey exposed her big jugs. Tracey took one in each, hands that were fairly large for a woman, and used her powerful fingers to crush Ilene’s tits. Ilene was sobbing, but just as determined. She ripped off Tracey’s skimpy top, and attacked Tracey’s now exposed boobs. Her hands were not as big as Tracey’s, her grip not quite as good, but her hands were every bit as strong. Soon, Tracy was sobbing as her tits ached.
The 2 warriors were intent on crushing each other’s assets. They fought without moving for 5 minutes, though it seemed to them as if it were hours. Both teary eyed, and in intense pain, Tracey made the first move, Trying to use her height and weight, she attempt to move forward and bowl over Ilene. I was pushed backwards suddenly, but then fell backward, lifting a foot to catch Tracey in the chest and flip her over Ilene’s head. Tracey landed on the floor with a thud. Ilene rolled away and got to the wall, using it to get to unsteady feet. On the opposite side of the room, Tracey did the same. With her skimpy bottoms already out of place, Tracey pulled them off, exposing her lush black bush. She new Marcus liked that, and figured to show up his redheaded whore. She gasped when Ilene, dropped her bottoms reveal a full thick red mane between her legs. “what’s the matter bitch, you think you’re the only woman that has hair?”
Tracey is enraged now, at being shown up in front of her husband. She charges at Ilene, and slams into her, ine hand grabbing a tit, the other grabbing at Ilene’s pussy fur. Ilene shrieks, and falls backwards, Tracey following and landing on top. Ilene is in trouble now. She is sobbing as Tracey tortures her tit, and yanks at her bush, Ilene’s, feet are kicking, hands flailing. Marcus is worried about Ilene getting hurt, but knows better ten to interrupt Tracey.
Ilene is in deep trouble. She wants to quit, but she can’t let this bitch beat her. Tracey moves slightly, trying to get a better position, It’s an opening for Ilene, who proceeds to slam her knee up into Tracey’s pussy, feeling the wetness of Tracey’s fur on her thigh. Tracy’s mouth open, but nothing comes out. She topples to one side. Sobbing, wracked in pain, Ilene knows she has to finish Tracey off, or go through tremendous torture. Ilene rolls on top of Tracey. Bringing her knee over and cracking it into Tracey’s cxnt again. Tracey is besides herself in pain. Ilene grabs Tracey’s tits in her hands, then presses up, doing a pushup, using Tracey’s tit as leverage. Tracey tries to hold out, her strong will keeps her from screaming for 20 seconds, until she can’t take any more, she lets out a shriek. Ilene smile, and goes for the kill. One hand grabs at Tracey’s lush black bush, yanking for all she’s worth, the other goes into Tracey’s cxnt. Lifting with both hands, she pulls Trace’s hips a foot off the floor, then slams her down. Tracey whimpers, then passes out.
Tracey wakes up the next morning, sore and bruised, Marcus asleep next to her. The sheets are sticky and wet. She realized that Marcus had been in her while she slept. Unexpectedly, a smile crosses her lips. She was wrong, Marcus loved her, and Ilene was the nanny, not his lover. At breakfast, Tracey apologized to Ilene, and Ilene apologized to Tracey. They had new respect for each other. The rest of the vacation was idyllic, as the romance Marcus had planned, with Ilene’s help, went off as he had hoped.
Ilene and Tracey fought a few times after this, but not with each other. But that is for a different time.

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Re: The Nanny
« Reply #8 on: May 16, 2016, 08:52:13 PM »
Some minor issues, like formatting (a space between paragraphs will make it easier to read), but mostly really good. I too would like some flashbacks to Tracey's earlier fights and I'm really intrigued by the idea of them fighting against other people in the future (tag team maybe?).
RIP the account of Sophie Cees.