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The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana

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Offline deity17313

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #15 on: March 25, 2020, 06:01:38 PM »
Interesting
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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #16 on: March 25, 2020, 06:47:30 PM »
Nasty. Violent. Intense. Curious how this story continous and ends!
« Last Edit: March 25, 2020, 08:48:06 PM by tr0tz »

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #17 on: March 25, 2020, 06:59:13 PM »
Nasty. Violent. Intense. Curious how this story goes and ends!

Me too.  I genuinely can't decide . . .

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #18 on: March 25, 2020, 07:22:18 PM »

For a minute, nothing happened.  Dana stayed on her knees.  She looked utterly exhausted. Her cheek and nose and mouth were all bleeding steadily, dripping from her chin and jaw onto her chest.  Her tits were slashed and battered almost as badly as she and Holly had done to each other, and remember in that fight Dana had ruptured one of the blonde girl’s big boobs.  She gently touched her pussy and winced, her fingers coming away bloody.

Marcy stirred, and moaned.

“Have you had enough, you little slut?” Dana said.

Marcy shook her head.

"Fuck you, Dana,” she said.  She slurred her words

Dana came for her, for what must have seemed like the thousandth time.

Marcy slashed her across her abs with the corkscrew.  Dana screamed and jerked back, and that probably saved her breast, as Marcy’s fist whipped up.  The weapon didn’t miss entirely - it ripped a gash up the undercurve of Dana tit into the bottom edge of her areola - but make no mistake, Marcy had aimed to stab deep into its center.

Dana went down with Marcy on her.  Dana caught Marcy’s wrist, stopping another stabbing strike just inches from her nipple.  Marcy bore down, growling.  I am dead serious, she was fucking growling, like a she-wolf.  Dana barely managed to deflect her.  The steel tore a second gash down the side of her breast.

Dana threw her off with a shriek of desperation.  Marcy slammed hard into the wet bar.  She lost the corkscrew, which spun across the floor and under a chair.  The empty wine bottle crashed to the floor.

Dana reached it first.  She swung it like a tennis forearm into Mary’s chest, smashing her right tit flat against her rib cage.

“You cut my tit,” Dana said, and in her voice I heard the kind of ice Dante described in hell. 

She clubbed Marcy with the bottle.  Her head, her tits, her ribs, her arms, her legs.  I was watching my long-time mistress beat my wife to death with a fucking wine bottle that I had drunk with yet another woman, and my cock was like a steel rod.  Lost souls, indeed.

Once again, exhaustion temporarily stayed rage.

“You ask her this time,” Dana said, her stomach pulsing in and out as she gasped for air.  Marcy was lying in a pool of sweat and blood, but she was still conscious.

“Marcy,” I said, trying to keep my voice steady.  “Baby.  Say you’ve had enough.”

Dana crawled to me like a cat. 

“I want your cock in my mouth when she says it,” she said.  “I’ve beaten her little tits to pulp.  I think I’ve cracked every fucking egg she has in her fucking ovaries.”  She looked up at me from her knees.  “I’ve proven that I’m the one you should have married!”

She took me all in one deep gulp, closing her throat on my cockhead.

“Marcy,”  I could barely breathe.  “Say . . . . “

“I WILL NEVER SAY IT!!” Marcy screamed.  Once again, unbidden, hell returned to my mind as a metaphor.

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #19 on: March 25, 2020, 08:30:38 PM »
Dana needs to finish Marcy.

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #20 on: March 25, 2020, 08:52:47 PM »
Nasty. Violent. Intense. Curious how this story goes and ends!

Me too.  I genuinely can't decide . . .

You're the only one who might know if Marcy or Dana fought again or what part they played in Ron's life. Will Marcy and Ron split up and divorce? Will Dana win, become Ron's boyfriend and challenge Holly for a rematch? Or will Marcy build on a win and try to challenge Sara again? Only to lose worse until Ron dumps her for Sara or for another woman with bigger tits and better fighting skills than Marcy?

The Beach House final will probably decide on their fate!
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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #21 on: March 26, 2020, 02:51:21 AM »
Nasty. Violent. Intense. Curious how this story goes and ends!

Me too.  I genuinely can't decide . . .
Maybe a alternate universe catfight scene for each , Dana and Marcy if you cant decide on a victor. Could be a good idea for the twins as well haha
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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #22 on: March 26, 2020, 08:03:43 AM »
I held Dana by her hair, working my cock deep in her throat, until Marcy was able to make it to her feet.  I owe her that much, right? 

Owe which one, you say?

They circled. 

“I heard what you said,”  Marcy said.  “But he picked me, didn’t he?  Not you.”

“You know, the first time I fucked Ron was two months after your wedding, Marcy,"  Dana said.  "You hadn’t written all your goddamn thank-you cards yet.  When did you first fuck Nick?  Why don’t you tell us both?”

Nick again.  I couldn’t help it.  Marcy loves it best from behind, on her hands and knees.  In my mind, I saw Nick fucking her like that.  Her hair was in her eyes and she was moaning, the ways she does before she cums.

“Nick’s a toy.  A plaything.” Marcy said.  Something about it wasn’t convincing.  “The same way you treat him, bitch.”  I noticed she used present tense.  Son of a bitch.

They clashed, body to body.  I’ve noted before that Dana has bigger tits but at this point both women’s boobs were so swollen and bloodied that the difference hardly mattered.  In a mutual bearhug, they staggered across the room, grinding together.  The pain cut lines in their faces, aged them, but neither tried to shirk it.  They hit the glass doors to the terrace.  Marcy twisted, broke the hold, pinned Dana’s tits-first against the door.  She drove her knee into the base of Dana’s spine, then into the meat of her ass, then her back again.  Every shot smashed and spread Dana’s tits on the glass.  I knew Marcy hoped it would shatter, imbed its shards in Dana’s flesh.  It held, though, and as Dana slumped, it glistened with blood and sweat.

Marcy fumbled with the lock.  The door swung open.  She dragged Dana out onto the deck, slung her against the waist high railing.  She hit her in the face with a lashing backhand that spun and bent Dana over the railing, the edge of it just beneath her dangling breasts.  Marcy grabbed the one closest to her, dragged it back and forth on the rough wood.  Dana moaned as splinters stabbed into her.  She reached back, got her arm around Marcy’s neck. 

They tilted, up on their toes, then toppled over.

I rushed to the railing.  The deck was built to the dunes, so they’d landed in the sand and marram grass and tumbled down the beach side.  It was late night, off season, private community, unoccupied houses well-spaced.  And my two cats were now beyond screaming.  They struggled to their feet as I came down the beach stairs.  It was high tide, the waterline only about twenty feet away.  The long shallow beach dampened the waves but there were still small breakers.

They clubbed at each other, sobbing.  Fists missed or landed, hitting faces, shoulders, breasts.  They stumbled to the water’s edge.  They fell, rolled.  The first wave slapped them apart, but they smashed back together like cruel gravity drove them, the salt water burning every cut and gash on their bodies.  When the second wave hit, one of them was astride the other.  The impact jarred her but didn’t dislodge her.  Knees braced wide, she punched, drew back, punched.  The ocean didn’t care how many times

She finally got up.  In the moonlight, she was a goddess.  The next wave lifted the still body between her feet slightly, then let it drop.  She dragged it the few feet necessary to clear the high-water line, and came to me, her dark hair matted wet around her face, her body washed clean.

When she sank onto my cock, it was like a blood-warm sea swallowing me.  I spurted my own primeval life-fluid deep into her and she shuddered with her own orgasm.  She relentlessly squeezed me, held me, milked my cock as she came again, and again, using me for so long as any hardness remained.

I told my parents to sell the beach house; only I ever used it, and I no longer wanted it.

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #23 on: March 26, 2020, 09:12:09 AM »
very good, no idea who won the catfight though.Ending kinda makes me want to go out to the beach late at night, as the sound of waves ripple under the moonlit sky.
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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #24 on: April 11, 2020, 05:20:44 PM »
This story series kinda demands an epilogue. I’m too invested not to know the characters final outcomes damn it!

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #25 on: April 11, 2020, 05:59:20 PM »
This story series kinda demands an epilogue. I’m too invested not to know the characters final outcomes damn it!

I couldn't decide who I wanted to win!  I tried the ambiguous ending as an experiment - thinking a reader could see his/her favorite as the winner, either way.  I guess it didn't work . . . .    :)


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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #26 on: April 11, 2020, 10:05:26 PM »
The story was great and I totally am fine with your experimenting. That was meant more as a self deprecating commentary on my own need for closure. Write the stories how you want. I’ve enjoyed them greatly.

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #27 on: April 12, 2020, 03:45:41 AM »
Very late on this story, but: huge thanks, a very intense story with a very personal grudge.

I also would have preferred the winner to be named and some kind of epilogue: what happened to the winner and loser afterwards, did they fight again?

But then, that could be part of a another story as I'm pretty sure that at least for the winning woman, it wasn't her last fight.

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #28 on: April 12, 2020, 06:18:59 AM »

OK, OK, I get it.  You want to know.

The moonlit goddess.  The dark-haired victor who left her former best friend, beaten unconscious, at the ocean’s edge.

It was Dana.

I left Marcy - my wife - more dead than alive in the sand, while I fucked Dana.

I didn’t see Marcy again for two years.  Divorce proceedings never required us to be in the same room.

Dana moved in with me, but that didn’t last either.  She was an amazing mistress but a mediocre full-time partner.  I, of course, was no catch, either.  I’m just glad we didn’t get married.

I am fucking a married woman, though.  Her husband is gone on business a lot; he doesn’t suspect a thing.

I spent the night with her last night, in fact.  She was still asleep as I wrote the email on my phone.  The sheet covered part of her leg but the curve of her hip was bare.  Is there anything sexier than a naked woman lying on her side, that hip?  She stirred, and stretched.  When I first met her, I remember thinking she had perfect breasts.  Now, there was a small asymmetry; her left one was just a little bigger.

“What are you doing?” she asked sleepily.

“Writing to them,” I said.  “Before you change your mind.”

Last night, I’d found the position where the tip of my cock hit her g-spot.  Yes, boys, it exists, but it is nirvana to get to it with your cock.  In her orgasmic ecstasy, she had described a threesome.  I do want to be clear about that:  it was her idea.  I was still hard now, just thinking of it.

“Come here,” she said.  “Let me see what you’ve written.”  Her fingers idly stroked my erection while she read.  I watched her nipples stiffen.

“Perfect,” she said.  Her lips slid down my cock while I pushed Send.

Both replies came back while we were still fucking.  Both were Yes.  I showed her, while the sweat was still cooling on her skin.

“Mmmmmmmm,” Holly purred.  “A three-way catfight with both of those bitches.  You should sell tickets.”

She was full of great ideas.

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Re: The Beach House Finale - Marcy Fights Dana
« Reply #29 on: April 12, 2020, 04:23:16 PM »
Damn, that's much more than an epilogue. It's an incredible teaser for another sequel! And to imagine Marcy and Dana clash again ... what a brutal battle that will be!

Love the part of her breasts being asymmetric now ... guess their will be more breast torture coming for all the three ladies.