[Marie B.]

..... but as I started typing, all this stuff from my upbringing just flooded out, I don’t know why or how. It certainly wasn’t my intention, but that’s what happened and the story progressed.

That's how many of the best stories are written, including the one you just gave us. Just let those ideas flow.

Thanks!



Marie

[Kayla]

Thanks for sharing this intimate background, sweetie, which one could sense in the story, and made it so powerful, poignant & moving! I certainly could associate with many aspects in the story; certainly the emotional see-saw was brilliant & spot on from my early experience coming out as bi-sexual & having attraction for other girls! 

I was driven by my carnal lusts (and not for the first time…) but as I started typing, all this stuff from my upbringing just flooded out,

Yup, carnal lusts do tend to end in flooding - tee hee! 

Hugs 
Kayla

[Sarah L]

This story is SO cool!! Really touching. At times funny, then sad as hell. It feels like you love to play with the reader's feelings like a cat plays with her prey!

Love the story, simply great! And I'll say it to make you happy:
Oh wow! You are SO great! The entire world has to know how great you are!!! ....happy now?! 

[Jayne Jones]

Gemma, you are an exceptional author. This story is deeply emotional and somehow so private and honest it captivated my imagination completely. I am different to the Gemma in the story and yet there was an immediate empathy, you made me smile and fuck me, yes, you made me cry too. Thank you for posting this story Gemma and I echo the thoughts of many others here, please do not stop writing. I will wipe away my tears and look forward to reading your other stories.

[c_shark970]

Gemma,

I really like this one !  I can see why you're pretty proud of it !

It has so much perception and insight, yet the idea of how things played out....pretty amazing !  Keep on writing, as I get more and more impressed each time I read what you have offered up !  :-)

Chris
xoxoxo

[MasterTom]

WOW!...great story.  You have an innate ability to draw the reader in quickly to the story, and keep them enthralled while there.

[Laurie Breeze]

Gemma,

This story totally blew me away! It was extremely detailed, with great characters, realistic dialogue 'n lots of intense action but that's only part of the reason why I loved it! Your honesty 'n bravery in opening yourself up, baring your heart 'n soul revealing personal issues, your past, your family life, your emotions, your vulnerability at times.....Wow. Just wow! It was real. The entire story from first word to last.

This story was such an inspiration for me to not be afraid to open up when I write about myself, that the only way my writing will be honest, truthful 'n real is if I'm willing to take those risks.

Thank you babes for not only an amazing read but especially for the inspiration too!!! 

hugggzzzz 'n xoxo

~L~

[~Rox Erotique~]

Gosh! I haven’t looked up this story in a while! I’m so touched that it’s still getting comments!

Ricsua - I am actually writing a novel for release on Kindle and maybe even hard copy if I can find a publisher soon! Thank you for the support!

Sarah - Yes that made me happy and your emotions are always fun to toy with

Christine - wow! That was such a touching feedback! I’m honoured you enjoyed it! Luv you babes! (PS. Give the vegan a hug from me )

Jayne - I’m kinda happy I made you cry if I forced any emotional response at all I’d be over the moon, but that? That’s blown me away! I know you don’t come here as often as we’d all like but I love you for coming here to read my tripe *hugs!*

Tom - you’re a wonderful source of encouragement! Thank you for your kind words on this and in your PM’s they’re greatly appreciated!

Laurie - for you to say the story was an inspiration totally floors me! I’m so honoured! Your writing is fantastic and if in some small way this story can nudge you into writing more than I’d die tomorrow and still die happy! You ROCK!!!

Thank you to each and every one of my readers and an extra special thanks to those who left comments! Your words inspire us all to write more!

Much Love!

A teary eyed Gemma x

[Boundfighter]

Thank you very much for this story. I have had a lot of fun while reading

[~Rox Erotique~]

Thank you so much for the comment Bound! This story was a special one for me I'm happy you enjoyed it!

x G x

[howardcosell]

I'm glad these stories are getting another run through the board. Not only because each one is of top quality and has tons of emotion, but the person who wrote them is of top quality too.

[Jonica]

the person who wrote them is of top quality too.

Let's not get carried away, Howard! 



The stories are top notch though!  Especially this one.  It's one of her very best!  And I will begrudgingly admit the author is alright too.....



J
xoxo

[Laurie Breeze]

the person who wrote them is of top quality too.

Let's not get carried away, Howard! 



The stories are top notch though!  Especially this one.  It's one of her very best!  And I will begrudgingly admit the author is alright too.....



J
xoxo

Holy crap on a cracker! Did Joni ACTUALLY say something nice about Gemma?! I think we all just witnessed a Christmas miracle!

Merry Christmas x G x!   

~L~

[~Rox Erotique~]

The Dribbler has a new partner in crime...Please post your  8 pages of childhood angst in said forum(s)...this forum is FvsF.   No one cares about you or your childhood...both suck.

SA

Awe shucks, thank you piss artist! Your critique really made my day! I'm sorry the story wasn't fetish enough to accommodate the countless hours you spend sat in your soiled chair having a good old mastur-cry, wanking your tiny penis into a messy, self loathing oblivion all alone but alas this is a free forum that encourages interaction and expression of will. Whether I chose to write about a more emotive, introspective tale of two women clashing or just decide to write out a fuck fight tale between two waitresses who wanna hurt each other the choice is mine. Not yours. Just as I have no power to censor you and your confidence crippling, insecurity stoking attacks on people. That's your right too and I would never seek to take it away

What I would say maybe is that you generally know after a chapter if you're going to enjoy a story or not unless you're a complete fucktard, and despite the hate you like to spawn I'm pretty sure you're a smart guy. So maybe next time try something more to your liking? I have a story called sexfight which you might find more wank friendly (Or should I say, erotically charged).Then again if this place doesn't reach your high standards maybe try writing something of your own?

I hope your next mastur-cry was more successful than this one!

x G x

[Nutmeg]

Glad I wasn't the only one that wondered why it took 8 pages to figure out he didn't like it. Sort like watching the extended versions of Lord of The Ring Trilogy hoping it would pick up in the eighth hour.. or for that matter why after 500 simplistic wank stories why some feel the need to seek out more of the same and bitch when a story is not that formula.

"But Meg the last one had two redheads. The one before had one redhead and one blonde. HUGE difference" Ah silly me!

Save the "some one do stuff I no like. Make it go away ! " shit for the comic book and geek forums. At least there you won't be the only angry 40 year old virgin, SA.